OS: The birthday gift - Page 2

such a cute os :D :D

that is too cute really !! Very very nice😊

That was SO damned cute!

awww that was so cute and perfect

Awww.. Too cute.. A nice plan to make Arnav realise his feelings.. ❤️

a lovely heart-warming os... loved seeing everyone ganging up on arnav and khushi getting the better of him!

Ohhh Reserved Reserved Reserved!! =D bit busy right now, will be back to comment =D =D

*EDITED*

Ohhh Emmm Geee!! You dedicated this Awesome piece of writing to Meee?! I feel sooo honoured!! So touched! *sniff sniff* See I'm even crying tears of Joy!

Hahaha! And the best part is I dedicated my update to you and as soon as I'd posted it, I went to my Private Messenger (which is always crowded) and when I saw your PM I got sooo excited, but I had somewhere to go and we were already late, So i just opened your OS and Reserved! And now I saw that the update was dedicated to me and you even used Ashar and Asmara's name!! I'm totally flattered! I love you girl! Its official now =D

Coming to the OS, It was A-M-A-Z-I-N-GGG!! And I'm actually a little miffed at you that you don't you write more often? You are totally awesome! Heck, I even want to steal your thinking cap which you donned just some time ago yesterday and came up with this brilliant piece =D

I love the Heer Ranjha dialogues! They seemed to fit it completely... Awesome Idea! Awww! It was Khushi's own idea, no wonder it was a little dramatic ;) Hehehe! But I loved it!

But the thing that impressed me the most was when you write Naani's and Maami's dialogues, it looked like the CV's had written them themselves! In the same accent, the same voice of words, I was dead Impressed!

And the ending was Perfect!! Esp the last few lines starting from, "Of Course she knew how to handle him..." Fabulous!

So all in all, It was one adorable and amazing piece of writing and If you don't write more awesome stuff like this, I'll personally come over to your house to spank you! You listening, Young Lady?? =D Hahahaha! :)

Originally posted by: velangini

that was so cute and adorable

jealousy works best on arnav singh raizada when ot comes to kkg oops kkgsr

loved it

Thanks so much!😃
Yeah jealousy is the only thing which makes Arnav do the right things😆

Originally posted by: Prinnia

Ashuuu🤗 Prinzuuu! 🤗

Really cute one shot man😃 Thank you😳
Missing arnav badly now a days Yeah me too
Want him back and want arshi together😍 I'm dying for it
loved the OS😳 Aww! Thanks again😳
Thanks for the PM dearie😛 Mention not!😃

love you❤️ Me too love you!
Prinzy Tutti fruti

Originally posted by: dumas

loved it that was so cute and sweet awesome loved how she got him to confess thanks for the pm

Hey dumas!
Thanks so much!😃