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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

well she seems to have forgotten the whole ordeal not that i can blame her

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sbk2

@sbk2

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Diya..

Loved the update! I hope you plan to write more! 😃

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580531

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Diya! 🤗 That was beautifully written dear. 😊 It was so endearing to read about Khushi not willing to let of her Arnavji (now that she has finally managed to get him right where she wants) even for a moment lest he would disappear again. Awwh, how cute was that. 😃 Is this it or are you planning on making this into a short story maybe and write more parts? I really hope that you would...😳

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monsi08

@monsi08

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Lovely update again... but i am angry for no PM 😭

I am sure it's the pain and medicines that's affecting her right now and she is not yet able to recollect all that has happened until now...

It was beautifully written !!!

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DiyaS

@DiyaS

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: monsi08
Lovely update again... but i am angry for no PM 😭

I am sure it's the pain and medicines that's affecting her right now and she is not yet able to recollect all that has happened until now...

It was beautifully written !!!

Oyyyeee ... I SENT you a PM!!! I'm lazy as heck in sending them, but I sent you one, am very sure!! Check your inbox again, meri maa!!!

I will explain what happened to Khushi in the next part ... when I get around to writing it down ... it's all in my head at the moment! 😛

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BIackSwan

@BIackSwan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

you wrote an OS and never told me!!!

*nadz narrowing her eyes angrily at diya*

what can i say i simply loved it cuz i pictured every word of yours in my imagination. khushi in pain, nannav in pain seeing her in pain... brilliant writing diya. loved it to da core 😍

can't wait to watch arhi's reunion next week...

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Strawberrie

@Strawberrie

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Very nice. Simple yet beautiful style of writing. 😊

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Doesn't Khushi Remember That She Was Shot ?! ; O Diyaaa, Please Do This To SS . It's AMAZING 😳

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

awww so sweet she didnt want to let go of him!

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Suni

@Suni

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Awww! Love this! She did not want him to go and he was so worried about her. So sad that she thinks that he would only cry for his Di and not for her...

Looking forward to part 3.

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