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savvy05

@savvy05

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

First the month that was and now OS.. Awesome Diya, you are making up for not posting earlier😉

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Sadaf Rizwan

@saduf

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

beautiful OS
each and every emotions were brilliantly describe

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zohakhan7

@zohakhan7

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

awesomeee
continue soon 😉

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unforgetable112

@unforgetable112

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

nyc one...

short n rite on spot...

u sud continue it u kno...

wud luv to read more...

n plz do pm me too thxz👏

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purplenpink

@purplenpink

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

That was so well written- simple and yet brought forth the emotions and pain so beautifully. Can't wait for part 2!

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

ooh.. finally , we get a story from you!

been waiting for one for a long time!😃

beautiful.👏
the way you get under the skin of the characters is unsurpassed.
the way you write the whole scene.. the background, the tone of voice, the urgency in the situation, the tension in the onlooker's voices.. i don't know how you managed to bring it in, but you did. 👏