Originally posted by: Lizzy2012
Nia-what can I say.u really write well.clear ,consice..the dialogues well linked.the triangle well described but with a heart
Hey Lizzy!!! How are you doing? Hope all is well with you!
Really love to hear your feedback about my writing 😊 let's me know how my writing comes across to others!
I liked the way you explained the significant dialogues today!! Especially the Maamiji-Buaji convo., PayAsh's 'door tak jaana hai' and Khushi's 'kisiko nahin bataa sakte'... bang on target you were with those!! 👏 as for the tight episode, it's just the way people here work - when you get the stick on your head, you immediately pull up your socks until you slack off to again be hit on the head and the whole rigmarole continues! 😆