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2future

@2future

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

i love it

wander what he will do?

looking forward to next update.

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Oh God Nymphs. That was great..Pls continue soon. Sorry for the late reply. its the beginning of the month and as usual my Boss wants REPORTS but this toime he wants them all together, No idea how i will tell the guy that i can make 1 report at a time😕

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KaaminiJha

@KaaminiJha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Fantastic.

Nice descriptions.

Loved the whole work!

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Sowmya Ramachandran

@sowms1395

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

I liked it. It felt like reading through Arnav

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-Devanshi-

@-Devanshi-

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

That was soo nice!!!how she refused to part with no matter what happens...him telling her that he would be gone just for sometime...everytime i hear it read it i remember how he hit her on the head and gave himself up to the kidnappers to save her...how i want him to come back and that too FAST!!!

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CoffeeMoCha

@CoffeeMoCha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Oh. My. Gosh.

THAT WAS FREAKING AWESOME!!!!!

I haven't been online for nearly 5 months now.I'm hoping against hope that I'm not one of the 50+ people to be cut off 😭. Although I do deserve it. Nyway. This was Magic. As Always.

Love Your Work Forever (and ever)

-MC❤️

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Caroline_arhi

@Caroline_arhi

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE!

WOW, AMAZING!

EEEK!

Gosh I adore your work, how can someone write so AMAZINGLY?

Thanks for the PM<3

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Shivana

@SNR7

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

How beautifully u enacted that moment as they stood united after their many struggles and MUs...loved how Khushi refused to let him go...loved how he risked his all to keep her alive...safe...just loved it...