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Nameera

@Nmyra

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

~ Beyond Redemption ~

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Authors Note

Due to a number of reasons including but not limited too a marked increase of plagiarism on the forum - I will be methodically taking down all of my un-collaborated work and shifting to a closed blog. Readers who wish for access may PM me at this Profile, Email me at 0nmyra0@gmail.com or tweet me for access.

Also on a personal note to every single reader who has been a solid support and inspiration to update at top speed - thank you. You have meant the world.

Edited by Nmyra - 12 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

eeek

so i love it

and you know how i loved how you described khushis tight hug to her version of his pin on the wall thing it was just so awesome

the whole reassuring her and telling her ten minutes

and bubba you dont have a choice to continue this

you have to if you want to read a nice arhi ff from me and want to see anjali soon so yeah :D

loved it!

Edited by -Chinnu- - 13 years ago

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

Sorry for the late reply. Your OS is way better than the episode. Very well written. Keep it up 😊

Edited by lazyleaves - 13 years ago

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hoping you continue...would love to see what he does...run together with her, or leave her behind, out of harms way?

Edited by --Nargis-- - 13 years ago

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

Okay! Let me get one thing straight with you! Never ever leave something on a note like that, and say you "might" continue. I'll track u down and ...! Are we clear?😈

Now! What a lovely OS! I love love love Arnav here, i know I sound like a broken record, but do!

It was short, but sweet, and heart-breaking, but heart-warming, and sad, but at the same time a little happy for his realization.

Now...I am gonna ask you sweetly, continue please, if not read my first line!😊

Edited by BlueMystique - 13 years ago

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sur91

@sur91

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

R u gonna continue this? Coz I really wanna know if arnav gives himself up or comes back to khushi in ur version. The start was just beautiful, it was a perfect interpretation to the long awaiting ArHi hug