IPKKND FF: Romeo&Juliet - Chapter 1 - page 6 - Page 3

wow! my heart is racing already! what a powerful prologue. LOVED IT! Amazing start!

Hey Another one! great start for a day.. I loved the prologue and would like to read more.. thanks for the pm.. and regarding the pms, even if u flood our inboxes with pms for updates, we're not going to be upset! kepp going!

Looks really interesting!!!! Can't wait to read more!!!!

I liked the start. It seems interesting. I am looking forward to reading more of this.

Great start, Aashifa... Looking forward to more.. :)

New story?!

Romeo & Juliet ehh?
sounds good. :) do continue it soon :)
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Originally posted by: -Murphy369-

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Now go on and Update chapter one, such a short prologue? 🥱 whatever okay!

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Originally posted by: Shruti_P

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Originally posted by: mollycoddle

sounds promising

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Originally posted by: -JollyJabeen-

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Originally posted by: Aveiro

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Originally posted by: rashgirl000

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First chapter up! woot woot! well I hope you like it, 😃 I hope I kept the suspense throughout! 😆 Sorry for not responding to all off you! forgive me 😳 and this is short but ohwell! its something eh?

Chapter 1: Fantasy

Her footsteps were light, fast, paced, her anklets adorned with her mothers memento, and her legs clad in the clothes of the evening, set for that particular occasion. Her hair whipped with the wind, the noise intruding on the usual patterned footsteps. Sweat poured down her back, but she didn't stop she gained her speed. Her stomach clenched in pain but she kept on going, not stopping for a swig of water. She looked over her shoulder and saw her friend, her confidant, her everything and was assured with a nod that everything behind was sorted, it was okay to stop.

So she did.

She took the long awaited gulp of water that her throat welcomed, like she welcomed the rain, her back began to strain with the heavy bag and she wiped the sweat off her brow heaving a sigh.

Like always, again that night something gnawed at her heart it felt heavy with the burden, heavy with guilty thoughts.

Should she stop doing this?

No. She should.

They were the enemy. And must be punished.

She hooked her arms into his, and starting walking slowly his presence a glow into the darkened night. His heartbeats assuring her off the good that was happening, his hands soothing away the angst that was taking place in her heart.

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He sighed a hefty sigh as he done up the top buttons off his shirt whilst Viren dictated the charges of last night.

Last night

How her arms had wound around his, how her hands had been clasped into his how they walked together, he sighed again. He had to let it go, that fantasy they shared it had to go, but how could he explain it to her? Would she listen?

He walked heavily to his plush leather chair barking at Viren to clear all charges, and replace the 'lost' goods for last night, assuring Viren that it will all be okay.

"No sir, it won't be, this is the third time this month and I have a suspicion that people are clueing on"

"Hmm" He responded.

"I think you need to explain to her that enough is enough, she needs to grow up, we all have, you have I have"

"Enough Viren don't talk about her like that-

"I don't think so Arnav, forget about the professional front let's get personal about this, we need to find a solution and find one fast, I refuse to believe that this is the only way she can vent out her anger"

"I know Viren"

"Well someone needs to tell her and it has to be you, she only ever listen's to you"

"Well believe it or not she doesn't even do that anymore" Arnav growled.

"Well break it down to her for god sake, this is the last time I will clear all charges, I don't want to be involved in this shit anymore so deal with it and deal with it fast"

Viren left, leaving a stumbled and confused Arnav behind, they had always done this, had this argument every time but this time there was a firmness in viren's tone that was not there before.

Arnav sighed and roughly ran his hand through his hair.

This had to stop.

And he was the only one who could stop it.

But how?

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How was it?

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-Aashifa