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Posted: 13 years ago
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holla... hi ... im kind of new ... but really like this fourm.. its my frist trial to write... hope u like it...

K:"nooo arnavvv..." .. (she suddenly wakes up... and looks around ... everything seems ... so lifeless without arnav... a silent tear drops frm her eyes...)
she is missing arnav really very badly... and is praying for her DM that he is safe and gets back home soon...
she is too engrossed in her thoughts.. and recalls all her sweet memories spent with arnav.. she gets up from the bed.. and walks to the pool area...
nd remembers the way .. she had almost missed .. a kiss frm arnav on diwali... and how she felt when h was near... the things that later happened...
just a tube light something struck her... and she stood there dumb.. motionless..
tht moment her mind played the scene
(A:mai tumare aur shayam ke bre mai jantha ho.)
... she thought ... arnav might have misunderstood her .. because he would have come in search of her during payal-akash wedding... and probabily would have heard her say that..."to choddigiye anjali ji ko".. and that forced hug... and concluded that she was cheating on his di...
she then again ... gets thinking... to kya arnavji muje chodke chele gaye?per ap nhi jasak q ki...q ki ... hum mar jayenge apke bina... hum apse bohat bohat zada pyaar karte hai...kya vo muj pe itna bhi yakin nahi karthe?... kya unke dil mai mere liye todi si bhi pyaar nahi hai..?... Q arnavji..Q??? and starts crying ... furthr continues... kash arnavji .. apne humse ek baar pucha hota... hum apkeliye apne jaan bhi dedethe...
however she coudn't sleep ... as she was so lost in her own thoughts about arnavji...
next morning...
as kushi was passing by anjali's door... she heard shyam screaming.. over the phone.. and she stood there.. feeling suspicious ...
S: tumlog use chod na mat.. turai jobhi kimat hai .. mai donga...!! aur ha... use uska phone do aur kaho ki .. agar vo chahe to .. apni wife ko call karsak tha hai.. per sirf paanch minute keliye... mai todi deer mai aonga.. (he sarcastically laughs... and disconnects the phone...) in his mind...(sale saab ab apka kya hoga... ha ha ha ...)
K:kis ke bare mai baat karrahe honge?...
just tht moment... she gets a call from arnav...
she is a little releived tht h calld...
K:arnavji .. kaise hai ap? ap kaha hai?...ap kab aara he hai?... arnavji... and starts crying...
A:kushi...!!... pls rona mat ... mai tumari ankho mai aasoon nahi dek sak tha... "im sorry"... meri vaja se tumai itna duk sena pada... muje mafkardo
muje tumse kuch khena hai ..." kushi... I...LOVE..YOU.."... just then the call gets disconnectd... and a tear drops from his eyes...
kushi ... couldnot utter a sngle word... it took her minutes... to compose herself ... and tht is when she understood tht .. arnav was in danger and it had to do smething with shayam
(as she remembers ... the wy shyam talkd over the phone... nd then...recalls arnav's words..)
she finally thanks her DM tht arnav finally told what his heart and he desires ... nd now its her turn... no mtter what she'll tell him.. that she is HIS and save him too... (and silently says .. 'hum aarahe hai arnavji akepass...kaise bhai karke "looking at the phone..)
so how is it??? im not good with writng ... so pls ... dont b disheartend...
leave ur comments...
like it tooo 😛 if u like... thank you ..!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good & brilliant yar...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep trying!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: CHANU.SUCHI

Good & brilliant yar...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep trying!!!!!!!!


THANKYOU... !! 😛 nice of u

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