UPDATED - Fathom and Starlust - CH 13.Anticipation

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Posted: 13 years ago
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So I caved and ventured into the world of FFs
I started writing the Fan Fiction on my blog but there were many suggestions that I put it on IF
So here it is read and comment, you guys know the drill by now.
You comment and I know whether I am touching a nerve.😉
PS: I'll be sending out PMs about regular updates so Buddy Me.

Prologue

Hopelessly he dragged himself out of his car, the grey clouds above mercilessly raging a storm and crashing to destroy the dry earth beneath him, much like what his heart felt.


The mighty Arnav Singh Raizada had fallen, fallen deep in love, again.


She walked home, reeling from the storm within, totally unaware of the storm brewing in the sky above. Her soul was drenched and so was everything that surrounded her.



The fearless Khushi Kumari Gupta had fallen, fallen deep in love, again.


CHAPTER 1. https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/57410119 - PG1.

CHAPTER 2. https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/57411774 - PG.2

CHAPTER 3. https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/57452022 - PG.4

CHAPTER 4 ONWARD ON THE BLOG - https://fathomandstarlust.blogspot.in/


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 1 - The fateful night.


Khushi knew but one thing, it was now or never. She wanted to take control and wanted her life back.

She had walked out on him, months ago and never once looked back, but destiny as we know, had different plans.


Arnav knew how a little part in him died the day she left his abode. Abandoning him with nothing but memories.

Memories that would haunt him.


They had a tangled past, one that was filled with remorse, regret, angst, hatred, sorrow and an underlying emotion that had knotted them together.


August 19th, 7:30pm - Delhi


Khushi stood at the bus stop across the Laxmi temple, she couldn't wait to get home to Amma.

She heard her stomach rumble and with that a shudder rang up in the sky, a smile lit up her face and she uttered in a whisper "looks like Devi Mayya's hungry too".

She looked at her watch and thought to herself a quick temple visit would be perfect, besides she knew it was time for the daily prayers.


She ran across the street and bought a small garland, a dry coconut and some sweet to offer as Prasad.

She didn't have elaborate prayers and wishes. All she said was "God bless me and bless everybody."


She was about to turn and leave the temple when she suddenly felt a familiar feeling rouse within, a nervousness of some sorts. She dared herself to not look behind. She started backing up a few steps, her eyes still fixed on the idol, slowly chanting Devi Mayya's name.

The evening prayers begun and everyone was lost in the resonating praises for the god. Her pulse was no longer rhythmical, she knew this feeling and also banished the thought. Few steps more and she almost stumbled, her cellphone came crashing to the floor. She muttered to herself "Calm down Khushi, you're in the safest place." With that, she eased her body a little and bent down to pick up the cellphone."

She turned around and all her fears came true. Khushi saw her and froze.


Arnav sunk lower in the bucket seats of his new car. He always preferred taking the sedan when he drove his Di around town.

He restlessly tapped on the dash board and then slouched forward to rest his head on the wheel. His mind was blank and he enjoyed not having any thoughts in his head.


Suddenly he heard a thud on the bonnet, someone had just collided with his car and broken his meditative state of mind.

Anger rose and Arnav lifted his head only to see a blue cloth spread across the length of his windscreen.

He unlocked the car door and stepped forward, he saw a woman hurriedly picking up flowers and dusting herself. Her back was facing him. She fumbled as she rose and swiftly pulled her dupatta on. She had heard someone get out of the car and she knew that now was not the time to get into an argument.

She hastily apologized and before she could turn to face him, she heard him say "Khushi".



Edited by MentalExotica - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ME, you too have been bitten by the FF bug, eh? Good start. Why do I feel that these 2 are in love with other people not with each other.
P.S- Will you be sending out PMs?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Naach_Basanti

ME, you too have been bitten by the FF bug, eh? Good start. Why do I feel that these 2 are in love with other people not with each other.
P.S- Will you be sending out PMs?


Indeed I'll be sending out PMs Buddy Me for Updates. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: MentalExotica


Indeed I'll be sending out PMs Buddy Me for Updates. :)



Sooper! added.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting!

congrats on ur first ff... pls pm me for updates :)))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi geetu,
hun your story is so much better than the real thing that we are getting...keep it up doll :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shaam91

oooh...i like mental ji!:)



Mental ji... 😆

Sorry I just found it funny.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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After the First 3 chapters i will be moving to my blog so till then have some fun here.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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mentalwa!!
ham padh ke comment karke aa gaye!:P
ab next update?

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