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Risha

@LivingInPajamas

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Posted: 13 years ago

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Wow!! It was so beautiful.

I was crying while reading it. Khushi's dialogues from yesterdays epi were awesome & you used them beautifully.

It was so touching.

The funny thing about Delhites was that almost all of them complained about the traffic jams,the road and drainage problems etc etc but it would be rare moments when she would actually see someone getting wet in the rain for the enjoyment of it.She was one of those people.

These lines were the best. So true.

And the ending :

Trust,Hope and Heart :He was going to get them all back.

You know although I love your OS's but the ending always fascinates me. You always end them perfectly & I'm not just saying it, I mean it.

Overall, It was a sad one.

I don't even feel like saying that I'm first. 😔

Keep Writing.

P.S.- Do you remember that you have an ongoing SS called "Engaging Happiness"?

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Give this one a happy ending... make him go and get her back. ...😊😊😊

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Risha

@LivingInPajamas

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Doctor...
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Wow!! Itwasso beautiful.
I was crying while reading it. Khushi'sdialoguesfrom yesterdays epi were awesome & you used them beautifully.
It was so touching.

The funny thing about Delhites was that almost all of them complained about the traffic jams,the road and drainage problems etc etc but it would be rare moments when she would actually see someone getting wet in the rain for the enjoyment of it.She was one of those people.

These lines were the best. So true.

And the ending :

Trust,Hope and Heart :He was going to get them all back.

You know although I love your OS's but the ending always fascinates me. You always end them perfectly & I'm not just saying it, I mean it.
Overall, It was a sad one.
I don't even feel like saying that I'm first.😔
Keep Writing.

P.S.- Do you remember that you have an ongoing SS called "Engaging Happiness"?

Thankyou doc :) Glad you liked it but for the first time my own words felt flat on my ears.I dont know why I felt weird when I read it all [and yes I do realise I am posting negative comments on my own OS :P] Aww thats sweet of you to say-and maybe yes that is why I like writing OSs :) Lol yeah I do remember-but my brain keeps out dishing completely different stuff when I think about updating the SS -.- I am trying to-trust me =P

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Risha_ipkknd
Thankyou doc :) Glad you liked it but for the first time my own words felt flat on my ears.I dont know why I felt weird when I read it all [and yes I do realise I am posting negative comments on my own OS :P] Aww thats sweet of you to say-and maybe yes that is why I like writing OSs :) Lol yeah I do remember-but my brain keeps out dishing completely different stuff when I think about updating the SS -.- I am trying to-trust me =P

Hey Rish, Don't feel like that. It is beautiful seriously. You are an amazing writer & since I've no idea about writing & all I can't say that I know why you feel so but I can definitely assure you that this was one of the most beautiful piece of writing from your collection of OSs. So chillax. And take your time for the SS. I was just pulling your leg. 😆

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subiscs

@subiscs

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

rishaaa this s just beautiful ya 😊😊

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@Tish_Ani

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesum risha n thnx 4 pm

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lara3110

@lara3110

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

Loved it - It was beautiful and sad.👍🏼😭

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

Beautiful.. Such pain on both sides.. But he's decided to bring her back.. And she's waiting for him.. To lash at him, rage at him, but finally cry on his shoulders.. There is hope.. And that's what I loved the most about this.. :)