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Zania

@zaniax

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

WOW!!!! Beautiflul OS.

You can really bring words to llife ..kudos! to ur writing skills..Absolutelly brilliant 👏👏👏

LOVED it to bits!! plz write another part if possible :)

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Rae...

Andhera pagal hai
kitna gehra hai
Chubta hai, Dassta hai
Phir bhi woh mera hai...!

Is the Numbness...the andhera...or is it Him?? Woh pagal bhi hai, gehra bhi, Chubta bhi hai, Dassta bhi hai...and most certainly...if nothing Arnav Khushi ka hi hai!!!

Beautiful piece...loved the double analogy!!

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Rae, sweetheart, take a bow!

You are so talented man!

You have described so much in so few words.

Amazing!

I cried after reading this!

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Risha

@LivingInPajamas

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Rae that was brilliant,like seriously why do you imply that however minimum amount of words you write,turn out to be the maximum concerning emotions :') This is like the sad heartbreaking beautiful !!

Edited by Risha_ipkknd - 13 years ago

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shona-li

@shona-li

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Argh! You killed me! Loved it! I always love a grovelling ASR ;) But damn, how you wrote Khushi was wonderful. Hope the CVs plan to do the same!

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

501 word and it took us to another place her reaction her pain her despair perfectly worded awesome amazing loved the flow of the words awesome

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

501 words n so much emotions

rae u r just mind blowing

awesome OS

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shona-li

@shona-li

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

You know what I'd love? For this ficlet to be extended! Please? With a cherry on top???? :) :) :)

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

the description of khushi's feeling at prefectly worded . lovd that we didnt get dialogue but it was like we could actually hear arnav begging khushi to react but its zoned out somehow. really lovely.

xxx