Akhri Saasien ( a random thought)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Shyam :ARanv sign the papers i will leave you

Arnav look at him

Shyam : khushi ji did get sign from you but she had hide it some where she had asked me to tell you the truth then she will give me but i ..he smiled cunningly


Arnav: Khushi

Shyam yes Khushi who is taking her Akhari saas

Arnav what the ..

Shyam if she was fine i had not forced to asked you like this i might have trap her again

Arnav: what happen to Khushi?

Shyam: she could not take your kidnap ,she just reached hospital

Arnav what are you saying?

Shyam: she is in hospital as she fainted after hearing about you?

Arnav: i dont believe you it might be your and her trick

Shyam ok


it was the third day

Shyam walk in sign i will leave you

Arnav i told you i will not sign

Shyam: you really dont Love her

Arnav look at him "NO"

Shyam:she is dying because of you , she had just open eyes few times and asked about you

Arnav: was not getting how to trust him

Shyam: received call from Anjali he tapped Arnav mouth " jee rani sb"he put it on the speaker

Anjali " where are you Khushi ji just again her conscious she wanted to talk to you "

Arnav could sense from his Di voice

Shyam hum woh

Anjali: please aap baat kar la ,she started crying chote ka to kuch pata nahi ha ...i am giving her cell


Khushi voice echo in the room " shyam ji jab woh wapise aai tou un ko sach baat dana please , hum iss boojh ka saath mara nahi paraha "her voice vanished


Anjali: "kya ha yeh sub , bola aap "

they could hear Dr asking Anjali to go out patient condition is getting worst .

Shaym cut the call " ab aap ko yakeen agaya "he look at Arnav


Arnav: with eyes asked him to give him papers he just sign

Shaym: may be till you reach she is not alive


Arnav ask him to open he just drive as fast as he could to hospital her words echo in his ear hamari saasien roka jai gai aap dur gai ...he ran in the hospital Anjali was standing with payal both were crying as Dr was telling them she had expired Arnav just push him aside and ran in he his took her hand and placed it on his heart .." Khushi tumarhari dharkan taaz hoti ha jab mein paas aata hoon aap kyun nahi horahi " he was looking at the machine to see her heart beat..he just closed his eyes as it didnot work... after 5 sec a small peep echo ,he look at her she was breathing again

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Posted: 13 years ago
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so sad dear di
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mahi07

That started out sad and ended out being dramatic! Loved it!

Loved the ending :)!

it was a random thought , her hamare saas e rukh jayengi made me write this
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wah wah wah reminds me of chashish n samraat hahahha good one...ya something filmy will happen...n i cant wait ;)))

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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was a really sweet idea.. Loved the ending.. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh God, I felt feverish reading it... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww..so emotional but nice ending :)
ur random thoughs are amazing👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome one di. 👍🏼.emotional...
it reminded me of their holi convo...and arnavji saying...jab tum mere pass hothi ho tumhari dhadkhano ke saath saath meri dhadkhane bi tezz ho jathi hei.hamari dhadkhane ek ho jaathi hei...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome!!!
di so emotional just loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awe awesome
So sad Arnav didn't believe at first
Her Akri saas made him believe her
Very well said by someone "we never realize ones importantce till he/she is in our life. We take them for granted. But as soon as they go away we realize how important that person holds a place in our lives" thankyou for sharing your thoughts into a story :)

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