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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: slmu
Doods, fab post. Agree with you that dialogue made it very clear that Khushi will leave him. I just love your last lines about Anjali and Arnav's belief and disbelief in love changing to Anjali and Arnav's disbelief and belief in love.

Anna, completely agree with you, Shyam of all people...when will this girl ever start thinking before acting.

Pam, nice analysis of Khushi's need to see good in the world and her ability to smile. Your PS, its because his brain is still on holiday..😡

Nia, conflict between lover and brother beautifully explained. Ah, if only your speculation would turn out to be true.

Agree with all of you that Arnav believed her subconciously...but...the terrace keeps intruding...

What a pity BS is away...otherwise we could have had the terrace hug erased with another memory sooner.😆

Shanthi Hugzzz 🤗

Thanks... yeah that gold digger dialogue made my day ... I loved it and it also linked with Anjali too... 😃

Edited by doodleberry - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

arnavandkhushi: Very good👏

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I guess Bubbly will be there to clear the MU between Payash. If there Anjali will bring Arhi together, here it will be Bubbly, cos a lot of MU (Ha...rather MU kay naam par kalank) of Payash is becos of Bubbly right, so she will own up eventually when she realizes Payal genuinely cares for her.

Edited by Shwetha! - 13 years ago

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@pamk06

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

@ Anna: Loved you writing, it so simple and flowing and you analyzed all the main scenes so beautifully.

@Nia: Loved you character insight of Arnav

@lizzy: loved your insight of Shyam and the quotes are so appropriate.

@omoroboti: Nice writing, totally agree with you that Arnav will only believe in Shyam but I do not agree that he remembered the engagement.

@Bush: Loved your stories and your quotes, perfect for Shyam, Khushi and Arnav.

@Shreya: Loved your poem...it all amazes me, how people can compose and I totally admire your talent.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: doodleberry
Moi back from dinner... ki chal raha hain ??? 😆

Aapka intezaar hai😳

Sooo did Barun reach his destination😈

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: Shwetha!
arnavandkhushi: Very good👏

thank you shwetha dii...call me sanju cause that's pretty long i guess😆

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@pamk06

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: Shwetha!

I am sooo looking forward to FATAKKK scene at night. 😍

First time he got slapped in day, second time at Night.

First time in Right cheek, Second time on Left Cheek

Loop CLOSED😆

I know, I want to see that and then I want to see Arnav. I feel he should be exactly like how Khushi was when she returned from outside after Buaji told her ki "tum mera khoon nahi ho"...Total numb...

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Shanthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Geeta, Divs, sunshine, lovely analysis.

Bush, great quotes and story.

Shreya, loved the last two lines of your poem.

Shwetha, your rants are my rants 😆

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Doodle

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: Zuzana
Doods🤗

What a lovely post..I absolutely loved loved loved it.

Wow the Cvs seem to be listening to all the Redux gurus...script it for the common man..seriously I was surprised and shocked when Arnav said
'chap gaya mere dil mein woh pal'..never have I seen them spell out the feelings or emotions in IPK..its always been innuendos..Glad they spelt it out loud and clear.👏

Doods I was waiting from the past 2 days for you to talk about the triangle...now kushi has entered the war zone...and Arnav's job is almost done with him spilling the beans...now its all about kushi-Shyam..
..Thanks for posting that excerpt from Mar6th...wow..amazing how you had it done so long back...kushi will try to prove her innocence in Shyam's presence... Doods...amazing brilliant👏...I have never seen anybody laying down the story as you do and happening the same exact way...seriously they seem to be getting ideas from you ..you better start copyrighting your ideas😆

The terrace scene seem to be almost confirmed now..but what I expected was Arnav will realise the truth when kushi shouts out to Shyam that she loves Arnav and he witnessing it..but now after reading you its like he will realise it after he hears the truth from Shyam's mouth...and thats the reason kushi will walk out..he didnt believe her today but will believe her the day Shyam speaks..amazing build up for her walking out.

As you always say Shyam is an opportunist and today too he didnt disappoint but again his big mouth will be his disaster.

Hugzzz Zu 🤗

haan terrace to road to temple... Also I didn't write there were 2 things confirmed :-

1. the social stigma is happening

2. the loop to my dialogue and cupping face... that's happening too... 😆

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@pamk06

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: sree07

On didn't i tell you... ASR was mind blowing yesterday and true to his character. The ASR we have been missing ever since engagement day is back na? Love it...

I mean he should have said bakhwas... because that would have been cuter and apt for arnav's view.😉

Ya, he should have said bakwass but I guess he was in shock..😆