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Posted: 13 years ago
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How many of you are Edgar Allan Poe fans? None? Well I am! Today in literature, we read The Cask of Amontillado and we were assigned a writing prompt! Who knew that the writing prompt would end up being an inspiration of a new OS? Well it was and it's a little sad but hope you like it! Also, I suggest you read the story if you haven't already! Anyways, the background information is Shyam is trying to kill Arnav by shackling him and trapping him behind the wall, just like Montressor did to Fortunato! This is a monolouge on how Arnav is feeling and he is remembering the death of Khushi, yes she is dead, and missing her! And yes it's pretty short! Buddy me for PMs and Pms for this will be sent out later!

Tricked! I've been tricked by him! Shyam Monahar Jha, he is getting revenge from me for an accident! It's the past! How dare he? What happened that day was merely an accident. He got revenge from me for that? Do I really deserve such a cruel punishment? Of course I do! I ruined everything; we lost the love of our life, we lost you, if he ever loved you that is. Yet, it was only an accident!

How could I have let that happen infront of my eyes? How could I let you go Khushi? How?

I heard a familiar evil laugh, Shyam. Shyam called out my name several times before he placed the last brick sealing me, Arnav Singh Raizada, in a dark tunnel behind a brick wall. It was a perfectly planned murder! It was just perfect!

Flashback:

"Khushi, how dare you? Do you think I will believe your lies? Do you think I will believe you were innocent so easily?"

"No, and I don't care if you believe me or not!"

Khushi, I still remember how we fought so much that day, but in the end I was wrong and you were innocent! Khushi, I also remember the day when we got remarried! Do remember our fight that night? I still shed tears just thinking about the cause of a small fight and the effect it had on three lives. Hell, it wasn't even a fight we were just messing around!

Flashback:

"Khushi! How dare you think I will let you go so easily? I didn't just marry you so that I can let you get away!" I was smiling so much watching you run away from me!

"Arnav, catch me first!" and I watched you run upto the terrace!

If only it hadn't rained earlier that day! You would have been here with me! We would have both been alive if only it hadn't rained.

The slippery terrace of Shantivan from all the rain, took you away from me Khushi! It made you slip, you slipped, fell, died infront of my eyes and I couldn't do anything!

Khushi, my love, don't worry because we will soon meet; the one who tore us apart will be responsible for being the one who brought us together unknowingly! I will meet you soon! I will meet in merely a few minutes! Arnav and Khushi will reunite again, but not on earth! Like I said to you during the Heer-Ranjha play.

"Yahan na sahi shyad kahin aur ek dooniya hogi jahan tum aur mein kabhi alag nahi hongi!"

Well I will meet you there, Khushi; I will meet you in heaven. I will meet you in heaven, my love, in heaven. We will forever be together and happy in heave!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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so sad :(
but nice os
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWESOME THANK U FOR PM ME
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww so sad yet beautifully written loved it :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sad but beautiful Os loved it thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Totes Edgar Allen Poe style! All dark, deep and mysterious! LOVED IT! It soothes my weird dark-loving, sadist alter ego.. Thanks for the PM, and please write more like this soon! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: purplekid

Totes Edgar Allen Poe style! All dark, deep and mysterious! LOVED IT! It soothes my weird dark-loving, sadist alter ego.. Thanks for the PM, and please write more like this soon! :)

I'm not very good with eerie, but I tried! Happy to know you like it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thx 4 pm..but do write happy os..these days ipkknd sadness has newaz curdled my brains
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Posted: 13 years ago
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agast much loved the os very sad well written nicely done
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nooo!!!!!

That was so sad! But hats off to the way you wrote this! Amazing! Loved it!

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