OS: repentance. (ARSHI)(updated to part 3 and 4)

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IM TRYING TO WRITE THIS FOR THE FIRST TIME, PLEASE SUPPORT ME AND WISH ME LUCK :)
PART 1
Aapne khana khaa liya?
ASR looked up, as his wife walked up to him in a beautiful black saree, and her silky hair open. To complete this vision of perfection, she carried a fully laden plate, filled with his favourite delicacies.

he shook his head, as khushi sat down, and tried to feed him. he was gonna open his mouth, when he remembered
"This is my office and this is shyam's khushi."

he raised one eyebrow at her, as if daring her to try come any more closer to him.

Just then, they heard the clickety-click of heels on marble, and looked up as a young woman walked in.
"I need to talk to you and your wife, Mr. Raizada."

The girl was in her late twenties. With black heels, a plaid black skirt and a simple white shirt, she looked the part of a simple office worker.

ASR said, im sorry, i have to attend an important meeting in 10 minutes or so, and my wife is about to leave. maybe some other-

Two guards came running in and said, madam, you cannot walk into AR like this. Please move out or we will have to throw you out.

She gave the guards a cold look, and looked at asr, straight into his eyes and said,
I HAVE INFORMATION WHICH CAN DESTROY SHYAM MANOHAR JHA TO AN EXTENT, THAT SUICIDE MAY SEEM THE ONLY WAY OUT...

and ASR and khushi looked at the girl, flabbergasted and spell bound.

how was it? do you think i should continue? please comment and let me know?? ASAP, kayy?

PART 2
ASR and khushi looked at the calm and cool girl with a shocked air.
please leave, the guards were told in a quiet voice. the voice, surprisingly belonged to khushi.
just then, aman walked in.
Sir, the meeting...
cancel it.
but sir...-
i said do it RIGHT NOW.
yes sir.
Aman?
yes sir
cancel every meeting i have today.
yes sir.

The girl, meanwhile sat down and said,
I'm gonna need your wife's testimony...
ARNAV:and what does my wife have to do with all this??

a hint of surprise showed up in the girls eyes. she looked at khushi and said, 'please do not tell me he does not know.'

KHUSHI : voh sab apni jagah theekh hai, par aapko kaise pata?
GIRL: that is not your concern.
then she looked at ASR and said, well yeah, better late than never.
and then she looked at khushi, stretched slightly, closed her eyes and said, begin.

khushi, looked at the girl, closed her eyes and begun.
ASR watched, shocked and surprised, as every bit of shyam's manipulation came before his eyes. His heart wrenched out of him, and bled, as khushi showed ASR how wrong he was in every way.

Khushi finished. the girl lay very still, and slowly opened her eyes. khushi was surprised to find herself cry. she did not know, when all the hurt and anguish came streaming down her face.

and ASR sat still. As still as a stone carving. The girl, sensing the need for the couple to be alone, said, i will need some time to present my evidence. give me a few days. and with that she left, her heels going clickety clop on the marble floor.

Khushi looked at ASR and said, im sorry Arnav ji, i hid the truth from your family and you-
Suddenly she felt herself being pulled to his chest, and she looked up. Shocked to see the mighty ASR shed tears, she was like, what happened? please dont cry, i know the news came to you as a shock.

his choc brown eyes had melted to for an ocean of love, pain and repentance. he just looked at khushi and said

IM SORRY. and before he could stop himself, everything came pouring out.
and khushi stared at ASR, shocked, as he left his heart out open for her, so she could see how much he loved her.
and then came the part of all his misunderstandings. how he misjudged her, and in his rash hot headedness, how he tried to kill her spirit.
suddenly, he cut off, noticing the expression on khushi's face. her hands were tightly clenched into her sides, and her fae showed anger.
and he thought, here it comes, as he braced himself for khushi's wrath.
but it did not come, he peeked at her, to see that she was smiling softly and she said, its okayy arnav ji, i understand. Shyam is a clever man. He lived i double life, for something close to a year, without any of the two families finding out. Its OKAY, i understand...

ARNAV looked at her with hope, as she continued, but please Arnav ji, dont take my forgivness, for my acceptance. its gonna take me some time, to accept you.

khushi, take as much time as you want... But dont. ever. leave. me. or else i will die.

PRECAP: khushi FINALLY accepts arnav, and then... ahem ahem;)
how was it? do you want me to continue???
PART 3
the grey and drab view flickered past the window of his car. the scene outside reflected how he felt, drab and dreary. It had been a week since he lay his heart out in the open for her. Since then, khushi hadn't been the same. Hell, everyone in the house noticed. Twice, MAAMI herself asked her "phattii saree, tum aajkal kaahe itna chup rahat ho?" he remembered from today morning.
Oh, she fulfilled all her duties to perfection, but she had lost all her happiness, all her vitality.

Before he knew shantivan arrived, and he slowly stepped out of the car, walked to the door. refusing dinner, he walked to his room.
Khushi was their, quietly arranging his cupboard for him. he was so lost in this calm and serene khushi that... OUCH! as he realised he had walked into the wall

yeh kyaa? arnav jii? khushi ran to ASR, and shouted, Hari Prakash ji, first aid box lekar aaiye.
He looked surprised at her suden concern.
dont worry khushi-
aap chup chaap idhar baithiye. Bade hero bante phir rahe hai aap, lard governor... kitna khoon beh raha hai.
and he realised that his head was bleeding...slightly. They sat on the recliner as
he submitted himself to khushi, knowing that this is the only time she would bother looking at him.

Agar aapko kuchh ho jata toh? aap dekh ke kyun nahi chalte? aapko kitni baar samjhana padega... agar aapko kuchh ho jata toh hum-

and khushi stopped, putting a check on herself before she got too carried away with her feelings.

toh tum-?? ASR looked up
toh hum.. kuchh nahi
saying so, khushi got up

and that is when arnav lost it...
KHUSHI! tum mujhe maaro, peeto, mujhe swaami bulao, mujhe tang karo, mujhe paagal karo, please khushi jo karna hai karo... bas aise...

please dont stay like this khushi.It feels as if you have gone somewhere away from me... and that means i have die-...

for he stopped because khushi put her hand on his mouth..

hum sau baar mar jayenge arnav ji, par aap par ek aaanch nahi aane denge... saying so she burrowed herself into arnav chest and sobbed loudly. ASR was in his seventh heaven, he looked at khushi with so much of love and compassion.They stayed like this for, even they did not know how long.

Suddenly ASR realised that khushi had not eaten and said 'Khushi', only to realise that khushi had fallen asleep.
he carried her to the bed, and they slept, burrowed into each other, like one complete soul.

PART 4
goodmorning sir
goodmorning khushi
sir?
i mean goodmorning aman.

ASR looked up from is laptop and sighed. since morning, he had adressed 10 random people as khushi. He was still reliving last night, when khushi had forgiven him completely... now wherever he went, he saw khushi..

finally at seven, deciding to call it a day he packed his laptop and left for home.

DING DONG!!!
the bell at shantivan rang, and anjali opened the door for him..
di.. khushi?
woh darasal chhote, khushi ne apne upar dal gira di galti se, so she has gone to shower and change into fresh clothes.
smiling and shaking his head at his erratic brained wife, who was FINALLYback to normal said yeah okayy di, ill have khushi later, i need to shower and change..

CHHOTE?
huh?
you will have khushi?
sorry?
you said you will have khushi later!
ASR went pink in the face and said, i meant dinner, and quickly made his escape.
MEANWHILE AT THE SHOWER,
HAI DEVI MAIIYA, yeh humne kya kiya, saare kapde gille kar diye!! hum bhi na paagal hai...
AB kya kare hum??
saying so khushi wrapped herself in a towel, and went to look for clothes in the cupboard...
just then ASR entered and saw khushi in the towel, with her back turned towards him, busily muttering to herself, hum bhi naa ekdumm paagal hai. He closed the door behind him softly.
Deciding to have some fun with his wife, he went close to her and said in a loud voice, KHUSHI, YEH TUMNE KYAA PEHNA HAI?
khushi was startled... turning a deep shade of crimson, she started saying, woh hum darasal.. and stopped for...
ASR put both his hands beside her, thus trapping her between the cupboard and himself.
yeh aap kya kar rahe hai?
main, what am i doing.
coming back to the point she said, woh hum...
and she stopped, for ASR's nose started skimming down hers, and he whispered ever so softly, tum kya khushi?
her breathing turned ragged, as ASR kissed her on her nose. Smiling softly, ASR pressed his body to her, and gave her a slow and a soft kiss, on the nape of her neck.
A soft moan escaped her, and thats when ASR lost his self control. he held her face,ever so softly and pressed his lips onto her..
the world started spinning around khushi...
before she knew, her hand flew to ASR's back. she didn't know when he lifted her off, still kissing her, and placed her on the bed
she didn't know, when her towel was thrown off her, she didn't know when her hands feverishly began to undress ASR. all she knew was that there was a fire in her, which could only be sated by him...
The sunrays hit his face, as he slowly blinked his eyes open. He felt something snuggling into him. He looked down to see khushi, cringing away from the sunlight. his hand automatically raised to shade khushi's face.. smiling slightly in her sleep, khushi snuggled even more deeply into his chest.
He watched, as the worlds most beautiful thing lay beside him...
TRIINNNGGG... ASR's phone rang.
Curse you, thought ASR and picked up his phone.
"get your wife and come to the office today, said a girls voice."
"excuse me?"
"I finally found the evidence i was searching for.
please come to the office, ASAP."
ASR slowly put his phone down, to find that khushi had woken up, and was smiling beautifully.
He looked down upon her with a smile..
then said get ready sweetheart, we have to go somewhere...
"kahaan jaana hai?"
to office, that girl finally found what she had been searching for.
"theekh hai, you go and take a bath."
"No khushi, you go first"
"no no", shaking her head like a small child, "you go first."
ASR gave her a slow sexy smile. "There is no need to argue, we both can bathe together."
Khushi turned crimson red, grabbed her towel from last night and made a beeline for the bathroom.
both of them quickly got dressed and went to office, to find the girl waiting for them.

GIRL: whatever took you so long?
ASR: now that we will be meeting you on a regular basis, it seems, can we know who you are..

the girl took a deep breath..
My name is...

PRECAP : who is this girl, and why does she want to bring down shyam manohar jha so desperately? find out in the next part...


PS: thank you so much for all your support everyone. your comments truly motivated me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderfull!! :)
Continue soon! N yes do pm! :-)
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That was so awesome.
Glad Arnav finaly finds out the truth.
Can't wait tp read more.
Continue soon.
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good going...do pm me the next tym...
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Fantastic update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
That was brilliant.
Glad KHushi is back to normal and has made the next step with ASR.
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Continue soon.
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