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Thank you for the wonderful comments and response for my previous OS , which can be found in My All Works Thread ..Please viist ...
Dont forget My All works Thread , In Case You Dont get My Pms check

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Now Again I am Trying Another OS , its inspired from the Promo ,and ,.. triggered by some enemy Friendwas ..Gutter Post ..
And I am adding poll options Becasue they dont have a Dislike Button ..Please ...Vote , comment ...
Its after the Shadi of Pritika , ASR made the boy to act Manly and everything else gone well
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pritikas Bidaee brought back the tearful memories of her own , Wedding night , Khushi slowly retreated from the scene with tearful eyes...
Arnav was watching everything , Buaiji approached him
"Bituwa Humra Shanka devi Ko Dekha ..?"
Arnav " Nahee ..Idhar thee " he fumbles .
Garima also approaches .."Jeeji Vo Log Wait Kar Rahey hi .."
Bua" Ha ha Hum Avath hi .., turning to Arnav ..Nandini ( pritika's mother) ne mannath mang lee the , uskee shadi achey se honey se Mangal devi ke Mandir mey jakar matha teekenga ... ye Naye jodey ko Bahuth SHub Hotehee hi ..Hum ko ... Pause Karney Ka Kabhee mauka ... Pause
Tho Hum Or Garima abhi Jathey hi .."
(in short . Nandini had some mannath at Mandir which will bring good on married couples life , and Buaji and Garima want to pray teh same for Arhi and Payash )
Pooja Der rath Thak Hogee ,,thum Log Sojao ...Humra Pas Doosra key hi ... and no need to tell .. Sanka devi will take care of Sashi baguva ..
Yahee kahee hoga ..Apney Sahelion ke pass ..
Arnav nods in agreement and she leaves
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Arnav's on search , found her sitting on floor lying her head on babuji's laps crying . in his room away from crowd ... Pleading ..
He was in pain , sheer pain burning his heart since he saw the gift wrap in Khush's Drawer.and what he heard was heart wrenching
Khushi " babuji ..Apney humey maaf kiya hi na ... Hum kabhee nahee chahthey they ..ki .." sob " Lekin ..babuji hum ap se dil se maafi mangthey hi ... "
to his surprise he saw Babuji trying to lift his right arm , and finally placing his palms on khsuhi's head , Khushi .hold it kisses and cries her heart out ...
Arnav stretched his arms , to put his hands on her head consoling ..then he took it back ...
Arnav turned back unable to see her tears and leaned back the wall , tears flowing down thinking of the various moments of sweetness he and Khsuhi shared and the terrace scene ...
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Khushi felt two drops tears on her head she saw her babuji crying , she felt bad for what she had done ...
Shw qucikly wipes her tears and her babuji's ..Ap Math Ro babuji ..
Ab Dekhiye Sab Kuch ..teek Hua .. Arnav-ji bahuth Achey Hi ..Dekha aj Kaisey pritika ke shadi ko bachaya ...
Babuji looked at her in pain , confused ..
She understood , ha BAbuji Sab Kuch teek hi .. Vaha Sab ney hum Ko Apnaya ..Dekah Buaji bhee Humey Maaf kiya ..and ye tho ..merey Assoo hi ..Khushi ke Aasoo ... and she chirply smiled ...
And make him lay on his bed and gave him some medcine ...
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Arnav heard her coming back , he quickly turns and ..went to his room ..
what he saw make him shout .."What The !! .."
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Posted: 13 years ago
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To Be continued ...
Planning To ... that Option in your Post ... 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue it and PM me ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You write in current track, after I read I assume this one real, forget the real show, where is the update? Waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue please, can't wait to know what happen next...and do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nimishakumar

cont soon..!!
luved it..!!
wanna noe wat happens nxt..!! :D

Typing Fight 😆
y you did not commented on my Oses ..??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tAriAn

You write in current track, after I read I assume this one real, forget the real show, where is the update? Waiting

wow ..
thats an inspiring comment ..
tahnk you ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank You for the comments
Edited by -Magicia- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1 On Page 1 ..
Arnav heard her moving, he quickly turns and ..went to his room ..
what he saw make him shout .."What The !! .."
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Sashi's medicine have some sedation effect after he slept nothing can be done , Khushi was flipping a magazine she was planning to read , then she heard Arnav shouting ..
She rushed out .. Garima had already given a hint that they would be visiting mandir , so when they got delayed she assumed they will be at Mandir only and was waiting for them .
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Khushi eyes wide open seeing the site in front of her ..
"Ye Sab kya hI khushi ..."
A beautiful smile instantly crept on her face , Arnav forgot to fight , This si what he was never able to understand one moment she will be crying her heart out the next she will be smiling ever beautifully , and he dont want to cross examine it , either because it will be him only behind those tears or , he simply cant take that tears ... so not giving any second thought of it and analyse
"Arey wah ..they Done it ..I thought they will be joking .." and she said fondly ..caressed the garlands hanging down from the bed post and the rose petals on the bed , Completely decorated bed , as if for Suhag Rath ...
( i am not wasting time on Arnav's feelings , going to his dialogues straight ahead ..u all know whats happening in the show ..)
Arnav irritated "Ye Sab Kya hi Khushi .In teh morning Flowers are on shortage ..and .."
Khsuhi : " ha ha... Flowers kum pad gayee jo bacha tha ..."
reminding their rabba vey , " Vo bhee Ap gira diye ..and ..to make it Up you brought flowers ..and When Arnav Singh raizada buy something ..
Humey tho Patha Hona Chaiya tha ..Vo Poora Mohalley ke liye Jyada Padenga ... "
She said hinting his bringing plates on payals wedding and grocery for Buaji
Arnav " Yea ..Phool gir Gaya merey galthee Se ..??"
Khushi " Ha ha .."
Arnav " Oh Really ?"
Khushi" Hum Tho Kuch Kar key ..leney waley they ...Ap seedi mey chadkar ."
Arnav" Enough khushi Kumari Gupta ..You cant do anything Your own , and how can you ? Jab thuhme hud girthey phirtney se fursath nahee .."
Khushi ..felt defeated ,
Arnav points the Flowers and asks her " Whats all this ?? "
Khushi again got charged and started to adore the beauty ..
" Ap ko Acha laga ..." smiling warmly ...then look at him seeing him high ..she mumbles .."
ye sab Humney nahee kiya .."
" vo Aap bahuth flowers laye they and baki jo bacha tah after decorating the palnquin , my friends ..for fun ..to thank ..you . decorated here ...
uhney kya patha tha ..apko ..ye sab bilkul acha nahee lagenag a.. .. Hum Abhee nikal dethey hi ..."
She complained ..and cutely pouted and , reluctantly continued to remove it , but even though it was not at all bound tightly , for her fingers, it was getting really difficult in untieing , because with all her heart she dont wanted ...
Arnav could not ignore the childish glee in her eyes , he said shaking his head more for himself trying throw away the thoughts of her ..if he could ..
" Now leave it .. Mosquito net tho nahee dik raha ..let it be😲 "
and walked out .
Khushi cursed on his being incredibly unromantic , ..Hum Laad Governor Phoolon ki sej ( i think this is the word ) or Mosquito net Ka farak bhee nahee maloom ..Aur badey Aye poochney wali ..Apko Acha laga ..she mocked herself ..😆
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When she came out , she saw him talking on phone standing in the Varandah .
She twitched her lips and sat on sofa and decided to watch TV, waiting for Buaji to come.
She turned on ..the TV.
Crime Patrol type program " A Man describing how a man brutually murdered his first wife ... who is not rich ! .."
he came back after his call ended and saw her cutely sitting on sofa hugging her knees .. and staring at the screen .. He smiled inwardly and went back to room ..Khushi saw him going ...
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Edited by -Magicia- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue soon..waiting for next part...do pm me

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