OS: Lost in the rain

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zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Awesome work.👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved it.

Thanks.😃

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riti4u

@riti4u

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

nice one..👍🏼..really descriptive scene..

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Paru

@paru_rox

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Beautifully written 👏👏

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vivian_angel

@vivian_angel

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

awesum start..do continue it n pls pm me next time if u update
lovely !!!!!!!!!

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Srijanee

@luvflicksgirl

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

very beautifully written

bole toh very pretty in barun's style😆

loved ot to the core

plz pm when you write anything else

would love to read your work

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

amazing it was such a treat i imagined so well beautifully written lovely

the rain of love showered on arnav and khushi

romantic and picture perfect

i got reminded arhi in rain

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

a lovely os... the parts that reflect his worry and love were simply wonderful... the language and expression was spot on!

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rina25

@Nandhaki

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

woa yaar it is really nice story the way Arnav worried for kushi is beautiful

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crackerszone

@crackerszone

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

It was superb...Loved it...wil u continue?

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Tara

@Hollagurl

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Thanks guys for reading and commenting!! And actually when I wrote it I didn't mean to continue it, but if I do, then yes I'll def. pm you guyss 😊

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