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Zari

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hi guys this is my first time writing a story on Arshi on Indian Forum. Please do let me know if its good or bad and I am really sorry if its bad. Please forgive me😭😕

Khushi: Agar app Bua ji to Bua jib hula sekhte hain toh phir Amma to Amma kyon nahi nhula sekhte.

Arnav then turns around in the anger.

Arnav: Kyon ke meri Maa mar chuki hai. I don't have a mother damn it. She is death.

Khushi: Hum to sirf

But before khushi could finish her sentence Arnav stopped her.

Arnav: Sirf kya Khushi??? Tum janti to achi tarah phir bhi tumne yeh kaha. I can't believe it. You can just play with other feeling.

Saying this he just realized that Khushi Bua ji and Amma was there also.

Arnav then feels bad and just truns around and leave to Khushi's bedroom.

In the room.

Arnav to himself.

Arnav: How could I ever say this to her infront of everyone when she also doesn't have a real mother? Damn it why do I always hurt her feelings but she also knows the truth I don't have a mother and no one can take my mother's place then why she said that.

I will continue if you want me to. Thank you very much😊

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Frances

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Posted: 13 years ago

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You did very well dear. You outlined Arnav emotions very well. I would love to read your continuation. Thank you for post.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Fantastic writing dear

cont. soon

loved it

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jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Do Continue ;) 😳

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Zari

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Thank you soo much everyone for your comments.

Arnav then went outside to look for Khushi . He felt he needed to apologies to her for his behavior.

Arnav: Aunty Khushi kaha hai?

Grima: she went to buy some grocery.

Arnav: Okay thnx

Grima: Arnav beta koi kaam tha Khuhsi bitya se? Hum kar dehte hain

Arnav: Nahi Wo nazar nahi aye issi liye. Mein jata hoon shayad use mein maadad ki zarorat par aye.

Grima: Arnav beta aap aur

Arnav: Nahi aunty aur wasey bhi mein Khushi ki maadad karne ja raha hoon.

Saying this Arnav leaves the house and walks toward the guys who were selling the vegetables. He then sees Khushi and walks to her.

Khushi has no idea that Arnav is there.

Khushi to the guy to is selling the vegetables.

Khushi: Aap humne ek kilo payaz(Onion), ek kilo allo (Potatoes), Thore saare bengan, karele, aur bindi.

While Khushi was saying these things to the guys Arnav was there watching her. He was totally lost in her beauty.

The guy and some womens who were shopping sees Arnav and starts smiling.

Khushi notices everyone and then turns to the side to see what happen and she sees Arnav.

Please leave a comment if you want me to continue.😊

Thank you soo much I hope it wasn't bad.If was please do tell me😭😲

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