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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: --Siva--
OMG.. That was beautiful..

And this is your first OS? Seriously, If there is no mention I could not believe that. Tuned well!

I hope you would continue this.

Thanks for the PM.. Please continue PM'ing!

Originally posted by: lively-piia
hey lvd it...
it was cute...
n devi maiya is naughty...lol
song choice was supreb...

Originally posted by: -_-harsh42
Good job, Varsha!!

Jimi Choo, eh??!! Noice, noice!! :D

I really liked how Arnav and Khushi took care of each other without knowing the other that well. . .

The way you concentrated on the details caught my attention. . .

And Aman!!?? 🤣

Thanks for the PM, sweetie :D

Originally posted by: molten_lava
Sorry for not reading this earlier. Had an exam today morning.
First of all, the whole concept was different and good. Devi Maiyya's plans were awesome.😆
Is this really your first attempt? Coz this was written really good. Actually you write a whole lot better than me.
Are you planning to continue this? If yes, then I think you have a very good idea here with immense possibilities lined up. You could try exploring it.

Nice OS!👏⭐️

Thank you so much for reading and leaving a comment!! :D Yes, this is in fact the first OS I have published anywhere, but I have a lot of incomplete stuff lying in my laptop! :) Since I have exams coming up in like a week, I wont be able to continue this until they get over! I have many more ideas creeping up in my head just itching to be put down in words,but will have to wait! :D Thank you so much for appreciating my work!! Its very encouraging! 🤗

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@-FarwiiDobaara-

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

This is such a cute and sweet OS!! Love DM..<33
Do continue soon😳

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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Varsha!!!!!!! Hi:) I know I'm really late and now I totally hate myself for missing out on your OS! It was...wow. totally completely wow. I mean...wow. The concept, the characterisation, the crackling electricity that I would imagine exists between our beloved Arhi :) And especially the characterisation of DM...that had me grinning, especially when she heard Aman's 'Why me' :p Seriously, this OS was superbly fantabulous and I just wish I had read it sooner :) :) Kaash the CVs introduce a little divine intervention in the show itself, or I'll go mad :( Please keep writing and PMing me! I can't guarantee when I can read them (I'm actually using my mum's phone right now on the way back from saturday classes and already getting my fair share of dagger eyes :s) but read them I shall. Especially when I get rewarded with such literary brilliance :) xx

PS: especially loved the place you left off at the end...implying that the two of them can now pick up for themselves :P Touche :D

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

I love that song! That vedio took me back! Nice OS!

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raina

@Girlabouttown

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

its gr8.
can u please continue this one

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: -doe-eyes-
Varsha!!!!!!! Hi:) I know I'm really late and now I totally hate myself for missing out on your OS! It was...wow. totally completely wow. I mean...wow. The concept, the characterisation, the crackling electricity that I would imagine exists between our beloved Arhi :) And especially the characterisation of DM...that had me grinning, especially when she heard Aman's 'Why me' :p Seriously, this OS was superbly fantabulous and I just wish I had read it sooner :) :) Kaash the CVs introduce a little divine intervention in the show itself, or I'll go mad :( Please keep writing and PMing me! I can't guarantee when I can read them (I'm actually using my mum's phone right now on the way back from saturday classes and already getting my fair share of dagger eyes :s) but read them I shall. Especially when I get rewarded with such literary brilliance :) xx

PS: especially loved the place you left off at the end...implying that the two of them can now pick up for themselves :P Touche :D

Thank you so much dear!! I cant explain how happy this comment has made me! :D Check ur PM inbox :P