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Posted: 13 years ago
priya...finally edited mine pg 5!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sadie101

YES YES YES

i am first!!! 🥳
ok i am super happy...🤪
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umm read the crooner...now i need those 23 hours and 40 mins to digest it!!
don't worry will be back!! 😆
My love birds have turned into Angry birds 😉
Update:

I know i ought to be silent,

but the excitement of this keeps opening

my mouth as a sneeze or a yawm does. - Rumi

ok after my initial reactions to the crooner mentioned above this is what I did...

[like some of u might know...bashing umm i mean criticism is not my thing... hubby would disagree in a heart beat 😆😆😆)

But then I thought...what will crooner buddies think? No I must not disappoint them! I will think of some good solid criticisms...

So I started thinking hmmm... *five minutes*...*twenty minutes*...oh yeah! nah that's not good enough...*1 hour*...*in the car*...*while eating*...*while studying*...hmmm

Oh yeah...how about I individually criticize the characters...maybe it will be easier...

Ok let's start with Khushi...hmmm...no why should Khushi be the first one to be criticized...No!... let's start with Arnav...

Arnav *dreamy smile* hmmm 😍... IDIOT! You are supposed to criticize not daydream!!!

*Seven hours later*'..Forget this!!!

Alright...forget the characters...they are all flawed....let's focus on Barun... Barun hmmm... uhoh!!

Hubby: what u smiling about?

Me: Umm nothing 😳...just thinking 🤓

Then it struck me...just because I can't come up with any good criticism... y not go to the closest basher I know and he might help...and this is what he had to say:

"What has happened in this show for the past month?? Rabba veee...comedy...rabba veee...hello hi bye bye...rabba veee... What the...Rabba veee...ummm when is this story gonna move???"

"Why don't they just talk to each other...get this all out in the open...if I was in their place this MU would have ended the very day it started!!!"

Then he got me all pumped up...

Yeah khushi what kinda example are you setting for all the wives who watch this show? Seriously ...u can't handle ur marriage... why u after mine!!!!

Hubby: Umm can u be a wife like Khushi...look she wakes her husband with hot cup of tea and then stays up all night taking care of him...

Me: haha...u kidding me right!😆...oh no ur serious! 😲

And yeah Arnav...u u u...monster...what kind of example are u setting for all the husbands!!! How can u just sit there and expect your wife to bring food for you'go in the kitchen and help her out!

Me: hubby can u help me in the kitchen?

*Silence*

So Priya and crooner buddies...what do u think? Pass or fail? As you can tell it was hard work...took me all day!! 🤣

sadie...😆😆can i say...pappu pass ho gaya...something my school buddies have been discussing these past 2 days!!! absolutely loved it!!!!🤗the hubby- wife bit...story of our life!!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sask.ch1

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Wow! priya i am impressed. First when i saw the title i thought you are going to start romantically about the epi 😆. When i started reading i am like ' what the.. what am i reading'. It took me to read 3 times to understand the content and in what sense you are implying. 😆
I have seen now a priya in her Bashing best oops constructive thinking at best heights 😆 😆.
Keep rocking.😉

What a wonderful epi. The journey just began.
I have read Nandalala comment she said everything.

Sanaya expressions as Kushi when Arnav passes out was excellent. In real when someone we love is hurt by us whom we good humoredly done turns out to be serious how will we react it starts with guilt and then love doubles, suppose say the person is going to sit on the chair and we pulled it and he fell but hurt by some other object which caused pain then our immediate reactions will be exactly what kushi showed today.








And Barun is the best,














my god that fall and pain very natural. when Kushi is tending to him his expressions are wow. They are now subconsciously feeling the wife hubby relation. The marriage bond is starting. Even the feeling is so beautiful.😍 😍

I want to discuss about butchering the characterisation as someone is irritating with headlines 😆 but decided to let it go. I want to enjoy the feel i felt while watching the epi. I am so happy priya with your crooner.😳 🤗


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Zor ka jhatka zoro se laga...😆 U see I love "constructive criticism" and yesss its all intended towards CVs u see - how could they butcher ASR - first neck pain, then laryngitis, then fainting and finally falling 😡 Bashing to banta hai boss - KKGSR is all responsible for it !!!
Coming back loved how u put across the episode - just loved each pic with the captions...I dont know wat i felt about the episode yet - oh ya I love it silly me 🤪
This was the purpose of the episode and it was defined lovingly -
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nandalala

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Edited~

"Some people care too much. I think it's called love."

~A.A. Milne, Winnie-the-Pooh

'The Tale of Crossing Invisible Lines'

I actually had a "Crooner worthy" response prepared in my mind after the reading the Crooner today, but I deferred to ASR's medical condition as I myself am under the weather.😔 Your words are a prime example of why I love this space! Telling us like it is, even when the truth can be a bitter pill to swallow (for all in this game!) Well Constructed. Critisized. Thrown Out. Then Re-Constructed yet again for a new day! You ROCK, girl!👏 And a big hug from moi for ALWAYS keeping it REAL!🤗

Invisible Line #1: Indeed..Your first quote at play: the one she loves, the one she hates, the one she can't live without...It is the same guy!😆...That very scene where ASR in "Swami" avatar is revealed to his sister. The emotions here were very real. Very palpable. Khushi gets the message. She waits for him, even though she had been told otherwise. Yes, fridge, food, her eating it aside, she realizes he is hungry, he has not eaten, he needs food. Unlike the afternoon, he does not refuse her and put her in her place! Not because he didn't have a choice (no one would deliver, but hello, 24X7 coffee shops anyone?), but because of her offer to cook! How can we forget those fingers which licked every Khushi cooked morsel off of them at the office!😊

Invisible Line #2: He changes out of his work clothes. He calls out to her... "Khushi"..She says "Aaiieee"...There is a level of comfort there we've never seen before! Absolutely loved it! They are finally getting into what it is to be married! Somewhere, the line into it has been crossed! He has the hypoglycemic attack; I couldn't get over his hand here as it falls out to the side. For the second time, Khushi realizes she may have done him wrong! Everybody assembles. He calls out to di...di gets a cue from Khushi about the meds...Khushi brings the jaggery because that is what he needs Di gives it to him along with the meds...I really loved how this was shown. The triangle at work beautifully...The apex remains, yet there is a subtle shift in the triangle!!! Cut to the bedroom: Di feeds him the food prepared by Khushi... In a sense, she breathes life back into him! Whether he cares to admit it or not! Just beautiful!

Invisible Line #3: He actually agrees to sleep on the bed after she insists on it (first, with a "will tell di" threat!😆 Allows her to tuck him in! She watches him fall asleep... paces back 'n forth--loved the 'Rabba Ve' in the background here...reminiscent of the Rabba Ve we saw in Nainital when she was sick, and he, the caregiver. Also brought me back to the laryngitis episode...But today, her care was visible in ways we've never before! She pulls the recliner close to him...Keeps vigil. The tableau of husband & wife sleeping side to side was just beautiful! His waking up for water...He resists her offer again...She insists...And then the moment that captures that which will never be invisible to them...She holds him up...her eyes show relief, pain, concern, and sadness. For a moment she leans, almost wanting to kiss that face...Then her heart gives way to her mind...Her hand drops from his shoulder. But in the end, the hands meet, they are reassured by the mutual touch!

Invisible Line #4: He wakes with his defenses up! Her concern for him visible! Yet, he doesn't buy it! And then the fall--OUCH!😒 It will be interesting to watch tomorrow; I do think he will reveal certain truths to his sister...The hairline crack will start to see a widening!!

Definitely progression in their relationship! Trust also starting to creep itself in! I kept remembering the poem you referenced from ZNMD yesterday! How he insisted on being on his own, yet, in the end, he crossed his own lines to let her take of him! The development of dependence, indeed! If he can't see this side of her now, how will he truly appreciate who she is when the MU is done!?

Anjali was brilliant today! While her expressions in the first scene showed her apprehension, she did not allow that to mask what she expected of Khushi. Moreover, all her actions were subtle. She gives him the meds, she gives him the food, Khushi is still a bit in the background. I also thought it was interesting that as she left ArHi's room, she reassured Khushi that he was fine. But the implication to me was that he was ok this time, but lets not go down this path again! I also liked ASR's scene with Ms. B. He was caring enough to tell her to sleep because she maybe tired---lol, he's starting to be influenced by the kids in his life!😆😆

KUDOS to our NOVICES! If NOVICES act like SARUN, give me a screen full of them ANYDAY!!👏👏

Misses:
Shyam! (I know, I know...want him back!😆) And where was the chillar party?😕

It was an ArHi packed episode, marked with a shift in emotions to another level. Now I wait for tomorrow! Love your song choice for today! Its perfect for the special Rabba Ve we witnessed!

"Dil toh hai dil, dil kaa Aitbaar kyaa kijiyee, agaya joh kisse pe pyar kya kijiye...
yaadon mein teree khoyee, raaton ko main naa soyee
haalat ye mere dil kee jaane naa jaane koee
baraso hain tarasee aankhe, jaagee hain pyaasee raate
aayee hain aate aate, hothhon pe dil kee baate
pyaar mein tere, dil kaa mere kuchh bhee ho anjaam
bekaraaree mein hain karaar kyaa kije..."







anjali...fantastic tale!!!! love the title and your opening quote!!!loved all your invisible lines...brilliant!!! specially invisible line #3😃@bold...had not noticed it the first time as was busy arguing with my hubby...but saw it later and felt the same...of course you express it so much better!!!😊missed you last 2 days!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oooh Priya, sarcasm is dripping all over the place, huh? 😆

Yes, I "hated" the episode too, only thing I "loved" was the lack of monologue on Khushi's part, its such a "joy" when you cannot deduce what exactly she is thinking, what is going on in her mind..


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Posted: 13 years ago
wow babes wat an excellent crooner 👏
The last verse was just 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

No matter how well you do, no matter how successful you are, they're always going to criticize you.
Todd Bridges



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Posted: 13 years ago


Hi Priya,

Coincidence or not, I don't know, but I'm kind of writing the same lines for my two buddies in IF. Doods and you...Take care.

I'm in office rt now, but kind of free today. Btw, did u see the TOI article? See the comments, one G fan started bashing BS and all the Barunians pounced on her. He/she was saying that he is a copy cat.

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Posted: 13 years ago
he he relax and take it easy...😛..Calm down dear...nice post by the way..and I did love the episode..thts all
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: subiscs

heyyy...!!!! lovely crooner sweetz!!!!😊🤗 loved the quoteee...awww!!!!😊

I donno if the episode struck a chord with me!!!! these days am not able to tell if i like it or not,,
But who caress... i will anyways watch the show!!!😆😆

BS---- muaaahhh...love ya!!!! platter of emotions !!!! u rock..and u r a fab actor!!!and bring it on!!⭐️🤗

SI--- muaahhh...love u :) myriad of emotions babes...and no wonder u guys complement each other ya..!!! fav jodi...!!!⭐️🤗

for arnav and Khushi ----

They walked on, without knowing in what direction. There was too much to be thought, and felt, and said!!

--- Jane austen (P&P)

He fainted..i felt it was real...he fell on the floor ..i shouted ayyo!!!!
asr---aapke asar tho dekhiye!!!! ----😳😃

Proves he s a great actor..for the viewers just connected with him and went thru what he went thru too!!! damn i went thru 😆

i felt Khushi was back today!!! the khushi i liked..:):):):) she has her own ways of irritating..she cant do a fake act..cv's get that!!! for goddsake assaulting her character is getting overboard!!!!!
but she knows when she s wrong and here she doesnt want to say sorry...neither did i want her to.😊
but she just dint anticipate something wil happen to him and her guilt...her concern
and love for him just took over her..She knows he will not give in...he will show his attitude..but she is no less in those terms...😊😊

That scene where he pushes her hand off..and then when she tells him karne dijiye hume...loved it..😊

Arnav...oh my...he just listened to her today!!! He loves her..he wants to be loved by her..But betrayal is running in his mind and is stopping him...
right from the teeka scene till now--- He just cant let her go!!!his ego , his possessivenes..his insecurity and to top it up his feeling of being rejected will create an havoc.. much bigger than before..perfect battle between mind and heart!!!

all i can say is arnav can u just give her a benefit of doubt..i say take a chance with ur love --- 😕

If a woman is partial to a man, and does not endeavour to conceal it, he must find it out

---- Jane Austen(P&P)

i felt those few scenes before rabbave..their hesitations.his anger ..her concern..then he giving in made my episode...
It was not abt who is right or wrong..both have their equal shares...!!!!

"""Hukum Aapka Tha Jo Maine Na Maana,
Khatavaar Hoon Main Na Aaya Nibhaana, """

That rabbave --- i loved it..Love can break barriers..It never ceased to flow between them...!!!
Trust wil come with time..But these small moments will play a huge role

""Bandhan Hai Rishton Mein Katoon Ki Tarein Hai
Pathar Ke Darwaze Deewarein
Bele Khilti Ugti Hain Aur Gucche Bhi Khilte Hain
Woh Chalte Hai Afsaane Kirdaar Bhi Milte Hai
Woh Rishte Dil Dil Dil The Woh Dil The Dil Dil The """"

Bubbly -- remains enigmatic for me...tomo is friday and i totally reserve my judgement for tomo...😕😕

Anjali ---- right from the scene where nani told abt how khushi is showering her love on arnav till the bedroom scene i felt something big is cooking up!!!
anjali abhey yaar tum yeh puzzle link kar sakthe ho..apne pathi nalayak ka idea bhi nahin!!!
***bangs my head*****
and in the precap she sounded really happy..i don kno if she s trying to
derive something from arnav cos she still doesnt kno the reason for their marriage..she knows arnav loves khushi..But there s a bigger picture..maybe she s trying get it from
him rather..
why cos its not necessary for her to ask if arnav knew abt Khushi staying up all night..She never misses any change of expression in arnav;s face...
His nonchalant reply..and aftermath might also trigger events...!!!!

and she knowing abt Khushi not sleepin whole night ..guess we need to wait till friday!!!!

anjali--- am crowning u the chosen one again...Dont lemme down ya!!!

My guess-- maybe she overheard Khushi talking to Laxmi!!!! 😆😆😆

Precappp ----- The irritation evident on arnav's face..Now this s gonna be best part..am waiting to see how cv's handle it cos i feel ...

1) either arnav mistakes Khushi actual concern as just an act and shouts at her..and she telling something and al this doesnt go unnoticed by bubbly --just solving my confusion
on her role...((( no idea how a 5 yr...oops 9 yr old kid will solve it...or understand..cv's can do anything))))😆

or...maybe he blurts out something like betraying someone like his di leading Khushi to solve the puzzle...either way..MU clearance step 1

2) Goes to his battle mode with himself..maybe Khushi s really worried for him..There s much more to what he actually saw and percieved-- paving way for mu to get cleared ..atleast by
a step,,,

3)anjali might sense the wrong vibes between arnav and Khushi --- leading her to probe more on her doubts..
apni pathi ka wrong vibes ko pakad nahin paathi..!!! Kammal ho yaar..😡

or the best option...nothing happening at all cos none of my predictions have ever worked out..😆

So friday ...am all set for i need to answers..esp to the precap which s circling my mind in loops!!!! 😃

CV's--- yeah.i really feel Khushi must realise that she loves him..For a gal who believes in love and knows what it is,understanding that feeling shouldnt be hard!!!
in short boss acidity ko naam dena chahiye...😊

or i donno if u r planning to make her realise it that time when her trust is broken.. ie..when she comes to kno the truth abt her marriage!!!!

i have no clue..aapke dimaag mein kya chal raya hain..hey patha lagana..mushkil hi nahin..naamumkin hain 😕

whatever said and done--- arnav tu tho gaya.😆..cos u need to earn her love all over again sweetheart...!!!! redemption track..am waiting for it!!!! ---😃


But one thing s obvious..Love s in the air and it blinds u really well that sometimes one just doesnt realise the love itself!!! 😊

""""" unnodu naan kanda bandam manodu mazhai konda sondam kaindaalum adi eeram minjum """

Its the tamil version of Dil se re..but its got a beautiful meaning...It called kannere ((( tearsss )))

"""""The bond that i share with u is similar to the bond that the earth shares with rain..
even if it dries..the moisture underneath always remains!!!!! """"

i have spoken like someone who s obsessed with the show...hopeless optimist!!!!!
***sighsss and smilesss ****

P;S --- Its tamil new yr and also guess baisakhi tomo!@@ so happy tamizh new yr and baisakhi to everyone😊😊

Hi suba!!!! Wishing you a very Happy New Year!!!love your take on the epi...have been reading your comments and they are superb!!!!😃you quoted from my fav book...love it!!!@ bold...am so with you on this!!!!@bold red...perfect analysis of arnav!!!👍🏼btw you really have high hopes with anjali...hope u are right!!!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: laddoo598

Oooh Priya, sarcasm is dripping all over the place, huh? 😆

Yes, I "hated" the episode too, only thing I "loved" was the lack of monologue on Khushi's part, its such a "joy" when you cannot deduce what exactly she is thinking, what is going on in her mind..


Sarcasm...u jokes...hum to faintiya hi gaye sunke 😆
we are universal "haters" 😉 and the part which u "loved" totally agree on that...jst smtime back i commented on that in Redux too - so will just put the same -
its very imp for them to show the rest of the 90% of audience the inner dialogues of the characters - Pulp Fiction on Telly doesnt play out easily - and not everyone goes back connecting the dots - someone who would have picked up watching the show in last couple of months - how will that person read the actions - my mum started watching from the Hospital Hug episode - she has no clue of the formative base which was done earlier of the story - so some days she wont understand the pathos or reasons of the character's actions - also seeing and understanding is differnt.. from me telling and making her understand.
yesterday Khushi had some "snowball effect" moments which needed to be worded !!
The magnitude or the rehash of her action and the breeze of thoughts which she went at the below moment was missing in presentation no doubt-

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