spoiler for this week - Page 2

lets see whats going to happend?

Lovely as it would be to get the MU cleared, I would hate for it to be illogically just shoved into the script, like some of the comedy as been put, of late.

I just wanted to say, incase this commuication between your source and us is a two-way street, that the PHs comedy, isolated, is great. I love this whole ghoongat bit, Arnav's irritation is amazing and I laugh out loud when I see it.

That said, it's very very very ill placed in the script. They go really really intense one day, and I love the building crescendo, but only to fall flat the next day over ghoongat, and dabbas, and rabba ves. A good story, and a script, moves systematically - progresses with consistency and has continuity throughout the script. That's how you keep your readers and viewers hooked.

So if you could do a smooth transition from the intensity to a comedy track, and then just give us comedy - we're okay with that. But then transition back to intensity if you need to. Or one could be in the back ground. There are subtle ways of showing both, while building up on the frustration on each side, showing patience, possible attraction with strategically placed misunderstandings that rip them apart again. We'd beyond love to see that. But your oscillation between intensity and comedy has, quite honestly, made this all a very comical and not-so-serious a love story anymore It's not star crossed anymore, it's not even a lovestory any more ... it's circumstances that these two are failing to adjust to, confusion amidst all else, and two inconsistent individuals - which would be fine if we had not SHOWN a love blooming between the two already. At this point, we're going backwards with the story, which I presume was not the intent.

So with all due respect, and love, and loyalty - if this could be conveyed to the CVs / PHs - their isolated scenes are brilliant - acting and direction very well done. Just put it all together with smooth transitions in the story, better consistency and proper character development.

Otherwise, everyone just comes onto check out SaRun. And fun as that is - I, for one, enjoy their off screen SBS / SBB segments and interviews more than the show then ... I'm getting tired of reading written updates waiting for when I'll have the same feeling as I used to have during the diwali days, pre-Akash/Payal romance days - when I used to youtube it on the way home while driving ... give me back the IPKKND that we all have loved and support thus far, and have kept on the top slot at IF.

Please take this in the spirit of constructive criticism form a loyal fan who loves the show, and is providing feedback where room for improvement seems evident.

Thanks,

-S