OS- Nothing could make it better(part2 link added) - Page 5

Drizzie..First of all..A Big Tight Hug..🤗
How dare you call it a crappy one...?? Stupid girl..😛

This is Just Brilliant...Wonderful..U made me cry drizzie..U have potrayed ASR's emotions so well..I just felt like Hugging u..seriously..why dont u write Drizzie..? U should write more often u know..

Awesome..wonderful..Fantastic piece of writing Drizzie..plzz continue..btw..Posting something in IF after so long u know..
Love u..Muaaah🤗🤗

i could imagine the entire scene while reading this.. loved it, drish!! :D

Originally posted by: jenny1000

Wow, that was beautifully written. Everyone is writing such amazing OS. Why can't the writers come up with such in the damn show? They have got top actors, who can do full justice to any scene. Why resort them to comedy/

thank you Jenny! And i agree .. when the actors are brilliant, why can't the cvs not give us comedy?!

Originally posted by: zafi

Superb.⭐️

Loved it. Wow, very heart felt.

Thanks.😃

thank youuu!

Originally posted by: AussieChick

that was a beautifully written OS, loved the way you described Arnav's pain :)

thank you so much!

Originally posted by: ..Jojo..

This is such a beautiful OS! Made me cry, honeslty! Beautifully scripted <3

aww, thank youu! Didn't mean to make you cry though 😳

Originally posted by: bobop

wow..it was v v good...n ur first work..amazing..do continue if possible n pm me as well...thx

thank you! Will pm you if i do continue :)

Originally posted by: greenarrow

Beautifully written.. I hope you are continuing..??

thank you! i'm not sure .. may write another part :)

Originally posted by: Viviann

loved it..

thank youu!

Originally posted by: SobtiObsession

Beautifully written!! Do write more :)

x x

thank you!

Originally posted by: tinsel

Wonderfully written OS!👏

thank youu!

Originally posted by: TJ16ROX

loved it!!!!!

thank youu!

Originally posted by: -Khushali-

Oye hoye my writer baby! Supremely awesome!!!! I loved it. I will not ask you to continue because you have exams. 😛

I loved it and I loved it more. And I love you the most! 😃

aww, thank youuu Khushhh 🤗

Originally posted by: polly2312

Really beautiful writing!! Awesome OS!! 👏

thank youu!

Originally posted by: -Mayuri-

Wonderfully written! Great job!

thank you!

Originally posted by: flowers4u

fantastic os loved it very heart felt

thank youu!

Originally posted by: Bajaj.rb

Beautiful!!!

thank you!

Originally posted by: srilu_123

wow

great

thank you!

Originally posted by: -Sayani-

Drizzie..First of all..A Big Tight Hug..🤗
How dare you call it a crappy one...?? Stupid girl..😛

This is Just Brilliant...Wonderful..U made me cry drizzie..U have potrayed ASR's emotions so well..I just felt like Hugging u..seriously..why dont u write Drizzie..? U should write more often u know..

Awesome..wonderful..Fantastic piece of writing Drizzie..plzz continue..btw..Posting something in IF after so long u know..
Love u..Muaaah🤗🤗

SAYZIEE 🤗 Thank youuu! You're comment means alot to me! Will try writing some more, but can't say. Love youuu <3

Originally posted by: Stapleton

nice os.. beautifully written

thank youu!

Originally posted by: pinky0902

i could imagine the entire scene while reading this.. loved it, drish!! :D

pinkss, thank youu :D

Originally posted by: -bansi-

Beautifully written...!!

Loved it..!!

thank youu!

loved it..