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Ovi_Tanni

@Ovi_Tanni

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Grrr its sad story...she had left him😔 poor arnav...bt u described their mind very beautifully...awesome os!

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Superb portrayal of emotions...
Loved it a lot... :)

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

so beautiful... loved the part of arnav's choice of a lullaby: kya dhoop nikli suhaani!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

A. I hate you all for such emotional sniff inducing fics.

B. Its so beautiful that I cant hate you which makes me hate you more. WHAT THE!

C. These words have hit me hard - "It was love,she thought-that is what made her take them in and that is why she somehow felt more satisfied to serve them than any other customer.Once you had known love,you see it everywhere-it doesn't matter if you lost it or not,It still makes you stronger.It is that simple belief which makes the world one heck of a better place,despite those factors which occasionally make you go "what the..."

once in a while."

D. And just when I thought it was done, Arnav's part came in and I found myself very melancholic.

E. You have got to continue.

Great job.

Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago

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rina25

@Nandhaki

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

simply amazing if u continue i would be appreciate & pm me even if you dont want continue its ok becoz u r the athour here 😊

plz continue pm u r work y do u thin buddies are for 😉

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Malvika18

@Malvika18

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Lovely Update!.

Thumbs up for this one..😉

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AnnieARS

@AnnieARS

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Risha you made my cry!!

It was a heart touching, very emotional thing... Their separation is something i'll never be able to handle. I know exactly how it feels when you are separated from someone you love from your heart and soul.