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MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

that was very emotional indeed

the description of the accident was heart wrenching

and yes Khushi & Arnav have shared their deepest fears only with each other... this is one reality which is still consistent in the story :)

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Khesnee B

@..Peppermint..

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

awesome OS!!
it was really sad but beautiful
love how arnav comforted her

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sayli

@sayli_sarun

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

awww...how cute!!!!!!!!!!!😊

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velangini

@velangini

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

i really love you for writing this os🤗

that was emotional yet so comforting to know that they share their pain with eachother only

awesome👏

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

it touched my heart!!!!!! arhi should share such a bond😳 naddiya,i think u r an emotional person n thinks from your heart... that is why ur every piece of writing direcectly approaches heart n soul😳keep it up n never ever discontinue sending me pm😃

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

hey that was soo emotional...

very well written..:)

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LuxCal

@LuxCal

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

wow...tugged at my heart chords

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kajal

@kajal620

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

thank u so much dr for this lovely os...i jus lved it...moved me:)

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polly_mk

@polly_mk

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Lovely OS. Very touching... great writing. You kept both Arnav and Khushi's characters intact in this scene. I also felt that this is a good background story for Khushi's parents' tragedy. This would explain why Khushi is the way she is... always doing things for others around her. Her guilt for her parents' accident makes her go out of her way to ensure that everyone around her is happy!

Edited by polly2312 - 13 years ago