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caged23

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Posted: 13 years ago

"Arnav made sure of that"
Ouch! Thats like a stab in the heart

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Jasleen

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Posted: 13 years ago

Aw so sad nayika! But very well written!!!

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ShiningStar18

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Posted: 13 years ago

Aww sad starting. Poor Khushi !

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Piya dhaliwal

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Posted: 13 years ago

Aww really sad but still i loved it!

thanks 4 the pm!!

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hilly

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Posted: 13 years ago

aw, so emotional, yet brilliant !
too short as well ! :( loved it, nonetheless

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notacrimetolove

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Posted: 13 years ago

Sad but very beautifully written. You've written it so well that you can actually feel her pain and the emotions she's feeling.

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Sona

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved it...Khushi is emotionally broken by her so called loved ones!

-Sona

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canzasana

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Posted: 13 years ago

yeh you are right it was depressing but well written. its not easy to write depressing OS unless you are depress too. BTW is your assignment making you depress, well it happens to me sometime thats why I ask. TFS&PM

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SaJanLuv14

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Posted: 13 years ago

so sad...yet very beautifully written :)

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Daayan Bai

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Posted: 13 years ago

Great job,you managed to reflect Khushi's pain so well.

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