OS-Tom and Jerry

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Tahreem

@Angel-Girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

hhaah!!

her attitude i loved it

KKGSR :) ahah

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Loved all your work!

FANTASTIC!

Pls PM!

And pls do continue this OS!

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

awesome os..doo conti it plzzz !!

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Tandrima

@Veritaserum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

This one should not be an os make it a ff...please...i belive everyone is in favour of this

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Purplelicious

@Purplelicious

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

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Loved it loved it!! Superbly written...awesome flow of dialogues, could feel the tensed air as well as panicking Khushi 😉. Super Awesome, Brilliant!!! Would Arnav get motivated to do someting about that frostbite? would love to know...😃

Edited by Purplelicious - 13 years ago

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--drama_queen--

@--drama_queen--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

i loved ur os... yippii this time khushi won...

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enigma17

@enigma17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

👏👏👏

Absolutely brilliant! What can I say? Plausible and intelligent storyline. I wish the CVs would adopt this and use it. The look on ASR's face will be priceless and what a comeback from his wife!! Woo hoo!!!

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anuramesh26

@anuramesh26

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

wld lov to this form of kushi on screen. great writing keep it coming.😊

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Sanchari

@.hea.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

It had been one heck of a day. Who was she kidding? For Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada it had been a heck of a month...Her Husband ..No..tht Monster descendent of Hitler made her life miserable...Tht control freak Dragon was seething fire on her neck every single day...His Indifference,his egoistic controlling attitude and worst his lovey dovey stage performances in front of his family was unbearable for her...How many times she tried to knw the truth..but everytime her plans backfired...and tht Dracula blackmailed her with her jiji's Divorce nd forced her to follow his orders n tolerate all the pain n humiliation alone...

I have never laughed so hard at someone's description 🤣🤣 Really beautifully written . Last part was awesome!

Continuing this?