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Posted: 13 years ago

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wooo! this is a khushi tha i like

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Posted: 13 years ago

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This was too good to be an OS! This needs a part two!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Nice and you shuld continue it :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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These two, when will they ever grow up!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Purplelicious
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Loved it loved it!! Superbly written...awesome flow of dialogues, could feel the tensed air as well as panicking Khushi 😉. Super Awesome, Brilliant!!! Would Arnav get motivated to do someting about that frostbite? would love to know...😃

Thank yu so much for yur lovely comments Purple😃...It really means a lot..And I'll see what I can do abt Arnie boy's Frostbite😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Great stuff , khushi is incredible here , nice way to put him in his place ,pls update this at least do one more part.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Murphy369-
It had been one heck of a day. Who was she kidding? For Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada it had been a heck of a month...Her Husband ..No..tht Monster descendent of Hitler made her life miserable...Tht control freak Dragon was seething fire on her neck every single day...His Indifference,his egoistic controlling attitude and worst his lovey dovey stage performances in front of his family was unbearable for her...How many times she tried to knw the truth..but everytime her plans backfired...and tht Dracula blackmailed her with her jiji's Divorce nd forced her to follow his orders n tolerate all the pain n humiliation alone...

I have never laughed so hard at someone's description 🤣🤣 Really beautifully written . Last part was awesome!

Continuing this?

Thankx a lot Murphy...Glad yu like my thoughts abt Arnav ...I really Wish Khushi to use these in reality...

Originally posted by: enigma17
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Absolutely brilliant! What can I say? Plausible and intelligent storyline. I wish the CVs would adopt this and use it. The look on ASR's face will be priceless and what a comeback from his wife!! Woo hoo!!!

I'm really thankful to yu for yur woderful Comment...And I'm going to apply for the Post of CV...They badly need Me😆😉

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Thank yu so much for yur lovely comments Purple😃...It really means a lot..And I'll see what I can do abt Arnie boy's Frostbite😉

@pink ooohhhlalaaa Hopefully to prove her wrong he'll come with double vigour...😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Friends..Thankx a ton for Appreciating my work...I owe yu a big hug to all of yu🤗🤗...

Though i had no plans to continue this story further as writing is really a taxing job and I'm quite a lazy person..but after yur wonderful feedback...I'll post another part soon...Luv yu all...

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