Oh Why? - Page 2

Originally posted by: Purplelicious

Oh Why ?

Oh why the cruel turn of fate had to strike this day?

oh, even before the alluring eyes could start weaving the golden dream they always wanted to...

oh, even before the dew soaked petal lips could bloom into the sparkling innocent smile...

oh, even before the shimmering bindiya could be stroked by the shy luminous eyes...

oh, even before the tinkling of golden bangles on those delicate wrists could reach the heart...

oh, even before the butterfly could unfold her wings completely let alone visit the flower it had set its eyes on...

Oh, why then everything came shattering down today...piercing the heart with shards of glass, dreams washed away, wings clipped forever, shimmer turned into ashes, eyes turned into stone and...the bud died before it could...blossom!!!... oh why?

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dedicated to Khushi's broken heart😭

Originally posted by: misclog2003

Not that I am of any importance, but my first standing ovation to post in this forum.

I bow to you. I have been dying to read at least one article in this forum which would show as much love towards Kushi and your post did it.

Simply superb, awesome and I cried reading it.

bravo.

👏

Originally posted by: YPNHK_kiFANno.1

Simply Beautiful! 😳👏

Originally posted by: Purplelicious

OMGEEE !!! I'm humbled by your comments...thank you so much.!!! I'm overwhelmed to know that the words which I wrote can invoke emotions like this..You and any member who is moved by this is of ultimate importance to me!!

Seriously, don't even know whether its worth that much praise...(such display of talent here...that I think twice before posting😉) not a writer and not a poet...just started putting my thoughts/feelings together after i started watching IPKKNd..such is the power of this show...to bring out intense emotions...whether negative or positive..

BUt million thanks...you made my day and have inspired to write more..👏

taking liberties...to post my other two links...😳

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2794668/im-from

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2796886/floating-thoughts

Originally posted by: misclog2003

I read both your other posts. And both are equally brilliant. I am not just saying it. I do agree there are many good writers on this forum. I enjoy reading what they write immensely. but today all day, I have been longing for that one post, which touched on genuine love for Kushi and your post did it. You have penned it brilliantly. I will from now on make it a point to read all your posts as you just have become one of my favorite writers on this forum.

Great job.