ArHi OS - ~ Cursed Love ~

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

i do i do i do

desperately

you write out emotions so very well

beautiful OS !

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Maddy

@iMadz

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

OMG! 😲 😳

I am completely overwhelmed by this forum member's response! Loving it! It never happened to me that I try my first work in NEW forum and get this tremendous response!

A Big THANKS to ALL of you! 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

And for sure, I will PM to all those who asked me to! 😳

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lara3110

@lara3110

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

What an OS. Mindblowing.👍🏼⭐️ I could actually picture Arnav and Khushi and the creep.

Please continue and do PM me.

Bless you.

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

madddyyy 🤗 ...

loved it ... and yes i want a second "HAPPY" part ... 😛 ...

write soon

love

Sana

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538742

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Amazing one...

Nice song selection and best of luck of othrt parts..😎

Thanks for PM...

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Harshnee Vora

@harshnee

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

it was mind blowing

pls continue and pm when u do or any other wor of urs

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

wow! very emotinal. arnav how could you!!! hoping for a 2nd part

xxx

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

back is my tragic queen...
yippi.e...so u have made my debutant appearance on this forum with an OS on a subject u are infamous for😆

but guess what i want the end to be tragic in this...
coz that jerk A nearly raped her...and i dont take such kind of behaviour from no man , no matter whether he is her husband, no matter he was fooled into believing that K was a conniving bitch...
i mean u r supposed to be an astute and ruthless businessman with an eye for details and then u blindly bealieve that bas***d shyam, who has betrayed ur sis...how can he take his words as face value without hearing both the sides...and reserving ur judgement...
that where emotions, rage, anger, feeling of betrayal comes into play which completely fails u from having even the basic logical thought process...
its indeed she has lost her love...and her innocence which has cost her so much...which has been ripped apart by one man's lust and other man's prejudice ...

and no amount of grovelling, repentance, feeling of remorse, apologies can undo the hurt and tears, humiliation that K had to undergo...

i wud rather want a tragic ending although i am a sucker for happy endings...but such monstrous behaviour is unpardonable...

waiting for ur second part...😛

love u mehu

BTW in my bhashan i just forgot to mention how much i loved ur OS, not A or his disgusting act...

hope u give this OS a proper closure😛

reva