OS:Be with me,Forever Part 2-pg.6 updtd

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According to my OS anjali wasnot pregnant at the time of shyam's truth & therefore arnav told her the truth.He also confronted khushi & believed her too. Payash got married happily & khushi visited RM daily as she helped anjali to recover. Anjali recovered in 2-3 months & now happily married to her childhood sweetheart Dr.Rahul who truly loves her & accepted her whole heartedly after whatever happened. Arhi have been married for 4 months now & they love each other too much. Shyam is in the jail but has tried to run away many times & has succeded once.Now back to present scenario'

Be with me,Forever

He walked into his'erm'"their" bedroom. He couldn't help but smile at the photograph lying on the bedside table.She looked like an angel in her red bridal dress & he looked dashing in his cream sherwani.He chuckled remembering how she had forced him to wear a sherwani & he had argued back like a helpless kid.His chain of thoughts was broken by a soft knock on the door . He said a soft come in & smiled to himself but his smile faded as he saw HP standing at the door with a cup of tea.

Why hasn't she got it! He thought

He got really pissed off if he didn't see khushi the first thing after coming back from office & she was very well aware of the fact & thus always got tea herself.

Is she mad at me? He thought

He impatiently asked about her whereabouts to HP who looked quite scared. HP quickly said that she was in the kitchen & ran away.

"Khushi" arnav yelled for his wife breaking her chain of thoughts. She instantly got up & ran to their bedroom.

"Kya hua aap kyun chilla rahe ho?"

"Why didn't you get tea for me"

"I asked hari prakash ji togive it to you,didn't he'"

"after a hectic day at office I wish to see my wife not hari prakash" He interrupted

Her face fell for a moment then she smiled & said "I am sorry arnav"

He hugged her & softly kissed her forhead. This time she smiled genuinely & went to hang his jacket in the cupboard.

Everybody was sitting in the living area after dinner & chatting away. Khushi came & sat beside arnav after serving the desert to everybody. Arnav noticed that she was not her usual self,she wasn't smiling & laughing with everybody as she usually does. He made a mental note to ask her once they were in their room.

She entered their bedroom & went to change. She came back & saw lying on his side of bed. She went to her side & rested her head on his shoulder & made herself comfortable.

"Khushi,are you okay" He asked. His voice full of concern.

"Yes" came an instant reply. "why are you asking that?"

"You were looking lost when everybody was chatting off in the living room tonight. Is anything bothering you?"

"No arnav, I am perfectly fine" she assured

He didn't budge her further & closed his eyes while khushi stared at his handsome face. Sleep was miles away. She felt her eyes becoming teary as she thought about the events of the day. She remained in his arms for sometime . After sometime she got up but not before making sure that he was in a deep slumber. She looked at the clock which showed 1:25 a.m.She went to the poolside & sat on the floor holding her knees between her hands. Tears continuously flowed down her cheeks. She felt helpless, she felt like she was sinking deep into a bottomless well. But she had no choice, she had to make a decision & that too a quick one.

Arnav tried to pull her closer but found the other side of the bed empty. He instantly opened his eyes & scanned the whole room. He immediately got up to look for her when he found her sitting at the poolside & staring at the sky. He went closer to find that she was crying. He was shocked & went near her.

She heard footsteps behind her back & instantly wiped her tears.

"Khushi,what happened? Why are you crying?"

"Nothing arnav & Who said I am crying?"

"Don't lie. I saw you crying"

"Kuch nai arnav bas aise hi. Chaliye so jaate hain" she got up & started moving away.

But he held her hand. She closed her eyes. "Please devi maiyya don't make it more difficult" she prayed silently in her mind.

"Kya hua jaan?" he knew she will melt hearing this.

"Kuch nahi arnav sacchi. Humein bas neend nahi aa rahi thi isliye.." She couldn't speak more & hugged him tightly.He hugged her back & decided to discuss this later.

He carried her to the bed & soon they fell asleep waiting for a new morning.


This my first attempt on writing. Please give your feedback.This OS has 2-3 parts & I'll continue if I get enough comments.


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Part 2- pg.6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its great so far, i wonder whats wrong with khushi...

Plz pm me when you update!
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I LOVE the plot of this story..it's shyam free😆😆

but wat's wrong wth khushi? update soon
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great start, waiting for the next part 😉
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Very nice start, i wonder why she was crying!
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Loved the os plz continue soon cant wait to read the next chapter :)
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It is awesome.. Please do continue and PM me when you do so.
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its nice start ...con it soon
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Gr8...!!!lovd it!!!
Wanna know why khushi was crying...so plz continue...and plz pm me too...😊
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good plot.. waiting to know whats wrong with Kushi.. please PM me when you post the next part

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