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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

hiii zee...
i loved the OS...
but there is something i needed 2 say...
i think this OS wud have been much more beautiful if the end was tragic...the version u gave us is good but looks more filmy...i m going to b beaten up by u and ur readers😆

but i feel the pain, love, anguish, sorrow, guilt, remorse which has been so well portryed got toned down a bit when we see khushi surviving...
may be becoz i am a melancholic and sadistic gurl😆

but anyway lovely attempt ...loved it

hope i wasnt too critical or offending😕

Edited by mollycoddle - 13 years ago

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@..Anita..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

awesome os

as for your note...as for two lover being opposite, was the story originally about two siblings finding true love...i remember reading it in a tb article before the show started like in may

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

OMG I loved it was sooo sad but loved da ending :) x

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Electric_BuBBle

@Electric_BuBBle

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Beautiful OS! Poor Khushi, instead she became the victim! I loved reading your OS. I love this Arnav, so caring! Thanks so much for the PM!

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

OMG! how i wish something like that happens in the show too if Arnavdoesn't give a damn to khusi's truth! It'll really be a taste of his own medicine to him after all he had made khushi go through since their first meeting!