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hey guysthis my new ff this idea is of neha and i am wrtting it as ff
u can look at vedio



charatcter sketch

ARNAV: he was childish best basket ball player ,loved priya alot even more than his own lifeand evnen getting married to her but he looses her and becomes arnav singh raizada , a heartless person

PRIYANKA: everyone calls her priya ,she lives with her mother and younger brother ,she and arnav were in a relation ship for past 4 yrs,she died in 2011 (resaon will revealed in story)


khushi: she is priyas look alike (bubly just like in real story)

anjali : arnav sister


promo:
[YOUTUBE]watch?v=iOcMSKCxd90 [/YOUTUBE]





part 1 : pg 1

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Still in past

18 December 2009

ANJALI: aap chinta mat kijiyeh aap bahut acchi lag rahi hain

PRIYA: di par

ANJALi: don't worry aur vaise bhi yeh chote ka fav colour hai


Then priyanka enters the hall it is fully decorated with flower white one

Candles all around'and as she enters the hall a light falls on her and she starts moving and then a light falls on him ..her eyes were finding him only .He looked perfect in that white shirt ooh god he wore her fav colour and she wore his fav red'..

They both started coming closer to each other and then arnav bend on his kneel

ARNAV : I know is time main duniya ka sabse stupid person lag raha hun..actually maine d khuch alag karne ka socha tha par khuch idea nahi aaya toh decided sabse ; simple aur filmy style main hi keh dun''''''''''''.

I LOVE YOU

Kya tumapni puri life mujh jaise Bandar ko ensaan banana main laga sakti ho

PRIYA: of course stupid kyun nahi'tumhe yeh drama karne ki koi zarurat nahi thi tum . . hummesh se hi mera answer jaante the

(arnav knew if just day he said priya kalhummari shdi hai she would worry abt her shopping bczz everyone knew she was only waiting for arnav proposal)

PRESENT

7 december 2011

ARNAVs eyes opened with the call of his di

ANJALI: chotee

ARNAV : haan di (trying to hide his tears)

ANJALI: chotee kyat um rooh rahe the

ARNAV : nahi di,aur bhala main kyun rounga

ANJALI: vajah tum bhi jaante ho aur main bhi '..chote uss raat joh bhi hua

ARNAV: woho main roksakta tha sab meri wajah se hi hua tha agar

ANJALI: bas chotee kab tak apne aap ko uss galti ki saza doge joh tum ne ki hi nahi..aur . uss raat joh bhihua tumusse nahi rok sakte the..aaj agarwoh yahan hoti toh

ARNAV: di yahi toh baat hai agar who yahan hoti'.par wih yahan nahi hai meri vahah se

ANJALI: chote bas '.aur humtoh yahan sirf yeh batane aaye the ki kal tumhare London , wale client's se meeting hai.

ARNAV: par voh toh 8 dec ki hai na..

Anjali gives hima look

ANJALI : toh kya kal 8 hi hai . chotee aaj 7 December hai.. tum bhool gaye

Arnav 7 December main bhool gaya ''' and rushes out of the room

ANJALI: chote humne kam se kam batao toh kahan ja rahe ho

But this moment he was not able to hear anything

Arnav in car

ARNAV:how could I forget howcould ' par isse yaad karke fiada bhi kya

Then he goes to shop buys cake and flower

And goes to a house

He sees priya sitting in white suit

And smile at ARNAV

Priya: mujhe laga ki tum aaj bhi mera bday bhull gaye.. yeh phool mere liye

FLASH BACK

7 December 2008


PRIYA : how could you .tum mera bday bhool gaye I cant believe this ' tum priyanka ka . , bday bhool gaye .. I HATE YOU .. HATE U MR ARNAV AIZADA

ARNAV: baby sorry busy ha aur waise bhi abhi bday khatam bhi nahi hua chalo abhi bhi 1 hr and 22 min are left

(arnav knew she was angry bcz she kloved to hear priya..actuallymostpeople dint knew that her real name is priyanka)

PRIYA: I just hate you

Arnav:baby go and change

(priya was in night suit)

PRIYA : agar lejana hai toh aise hi

ARNAV :sure

And picks her and take her out and take her to beach which is fully decorated

Arnav in her ears whisper happy bday

And she smiled

Priya: promise me ki mere har baday par mere sath hoge

Arnav while kissing her neck :I promise

PRESENT

He place the cake and lights the candle suddenly wind blow and candle is bhuj jati hai.

Priyanka smiling I wish kit tum khush raho''

ARNAV: tum aapne liye nahi mangogi

Priyanka looks at him and then hen suddenly closes his with her hand and takes him out in garden and then he opens his eyes and fallon ground

Full of tears and sees PRIYA smilling at back of a stone

Arnav: dekha aaj bhi main apna promise nibha raha hun ..par tum nahi

PRIYAS smilling face become sad and say IAM SORRY

And goes towards the stone and touches it

Par main harpal tumhare sath hi toh hun

Arnav looks at sone now he is not able to see her anywhere and sees the stone which say

iN LOVING MEMORY OF
PRIYANKA
(PRIYA)
7 december 1988- 13 jan 2010

Edited by ambishika - 13 years ago
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PART 2

In lucknow

KUSHI: jiji tumhe dekhne delhi se ladke waleaa rahe hain ..ab tumdelhi chali jaugi

PAYAL:khushi hum jahan bhi jayenge apni es choti behen ke sath hi gayenge..pata hai khushi khush saal phele jab tumhara operation ho raha tha tab hum kitna darr gaye the

Hum sab ko tohlaga ki ab humtumhe hasha keliye kho denge par bhagwan ne hamari sunli aur deko aajtumkitni acchi halat main ho

Khushi: jaanti hun jiji par ja nane kyun delhi ka naam sunke dilmain khuch hota hai '. Par .es baat ko chodo chalo humlog shopping karne chalet hain vasi bhi hamari hone wale jija ji kopata toh chale ki gupa bhi kya hai

IN DELHI

Arnav was not able to concentrate on his work today everything reminded himof priya only the color of wall

ARNAV: pri plzzsahdikebaad es roomke colour change kar dena abhi nahi

PRIYA : nahi abhi hi main chahti hun jab shddi karke ess ghar main aauon toh yeh karma ensaon sa lage.

ARNAV:tum kehna kya chahti ho

PRIYA :yeh hi ki aise main toh koi Bandar reh sakta hai koi ensaan nahi

Arnav got angry

ARNAV: toh jao kisiensaan ke paas yahan kya kar rahi ho

Priya :agarmain chli gayi toh ess Bandar ko ensaan kaun banayega

And smile

Present

This thought only brought a smile on arnav face then his eyes wenton the book shelf

Thir were 6 diaris kept their priya had th habbit to write diaries arnav never read 2 diaries but read those 4 wwhich wer e abht arnav and priyanka

PRIYANKA was 17 when she started writing diaries

She always asked arnav never to read any of her diary bcz they her feelings

But today only this was the mediam which made her alive again

PRIYA DIARY
'

6 june 2006

Aajmain es college mainpheli baar aay aur aatehi mujhe sab logon ne bahut pasand kiyamere kain frnd bane like anjali.aakash aur ARNAV

Patahai bahut alag hai who sabse alagphele tohmujhe laga kihe is the colluegue basketball star toh full of aaitude butn nohe is very gentle and imagine anjali di use chotte bula ti hai

24 november 2006

Ooh my god abhi khuch pal phele hi toh main aur arnav mile the aur aaj usne mujhe prpose kiya .. I love him I really do

13 january 2007

Aaj dadki barsi hai pata maine apne dad ko 3 saalkiumar main kho diya aur tabhi se shyad decide karliya kiapnebhai aur momkakhyalkhud rakhungi par aaj main akeli nahi hun arnav mera sath de rahahai agarmain apni family ka support hunt oh arnav mera support hai

Tear camein arnav eyes and says priya jis din tumse sab cheenliya tha tumhare dad aaj use din ne mujhse tumhe cheen liya

Edited by ambishika - 13 years ago
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Part 3

Arnav phone rings

Neeraj : good morning jiju

Arnav :gm raj .aa kaise ph kiya ..aur wahan sab kaisehain ma kaise hai

Neeraj: aap hi socho kase honge …par purani baat chodo aap ko sliye ph kiya tha ki .v . . mera roka ho raha hai aur aapko aana hai

Arnav :roka

Flash back

24 december 2009

ARNAV:di yeh shervani phena zarurihai kya sagai ke din phenlunga aur aaj toh sirf roka hai

Anjali :nahi choteaapisseaajbhiphenge aapka bas chalet oh aap toh ghar ke kapdomain hi shadi bhi karlein

And arnav priya roka ceremony happens

Present

Neeraj:jiju kya hua

Arnav": main aaunga vaise ladkikahan ki hai

Neeraj:lucknow

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somany views still no comment n...it really hurts
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interesting start..do continue.😛
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thnx for commenting
next part arhi meet
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it has been sooo many months and no story
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part 4

still in past...

arnav decides that he will go in neerajs roka bczz he was also a part of their family ..
he promised to priya that he will always be with her family...

he straight away went to the rm and decide to pack and leave for lucknow..

he goes in the room and sees a list of gift priya wrote..
he opens the book...

FB

both arnav and pri sitting on couch..

arnav:what are u doing?

priya:i am just writting list..

arnav:ur fav habbit na...

priya:yes or i am free right now..
actually dekha our roka is done.. and one day neer roka wud have to happen so i was thinking why not make a list..

arnav on raj roka we will give im a biig gift ok..

arnav:yaa whatever you ant ..
but what will u gift him?

pria:nothing..

arnav:wht??

p:i will give him an empty box...

arnav:u are crazy...

p:u got to know it today???


fb ends,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
anjali:chotee is it nesessary to leave?

arnav:comeon di i promised priya that i will always support her family..

anjali:i am not saying that but chotte.u will only remeber her ..

arnav:i always remember her only...

anjali:theek hai..when u reach do tell me...


arnav:ya... u take care of ur self...
i will see jijaji is comming...

anjali:he will come soon chote...

in lucknow...

payal :khushi kahan ho tum...

khuhsi:jiji why are u not getting ready are going to be on ur roka like this only????????

payal:chal pagli chup...

kuhsi:jiji i will miss you...

payal:i will too ..i will do one think let me take u as my dahej...

khushi:why i dont have to marry????

payal:but u said u will miss me..

khushi:but i dont want jijaji to miss you...


payal:khuhsi ki bachhi ...
and runs back at her...

khushi:jiji.. u will toh go to delhi and me .. will stay here only???
:ya atleast amma babuji ke paas toh kisi ko hana ha na...

khushi:look amma babuji loves me more...

payal:how?

khuhsi:they got to tired of you that they decided to send you away...

pyal
:what???

khuhsi:sorry jiji..

and they have a small hug...
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Awesome updates:-):-)

Hope arshi meet soon:-):-)
Edited by kaba3003 - 13 years ago

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