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Posted: 13 years ago
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i very humble request i am one of you , what i am today is because of you all ,if you guys dont read and comment i am nothing , few pm really made me shiver as dont admire me so much i am nothing just a ordinary girl. it is God gifted and because of you all i come up with different ideas 😳 i dont know what to say bolti band

Arnav walk out of washroom he was late as he was not able to sleep , he was changing when his hand suddenly started bleeding "what the it was fine how it again started bleeding" he just became worried "DI, KHUSHI" he just pick his cell and ran down.

Arnav: nani where is Di?

Nani: she is going for pooja

Arnav: just ran out the driver was starting car he ran and open door "DI"

Anjlai: what happen?

Arnav: come out

Anjlai: but why "

Shyam: she is going for pooja

Arnav: i said come out so come out final he just taken the tray and almost pull her out and Hug her

Anjali " have you seen bad dream"

Arnav: yes he just walk with her in he called text khushi."i hope you were not able to sleep last night" with in few second he received her message

Khushi:"i slept peacefully "

Arnav: relax she is fine too .


After hour Drive came in "bhaiya i took car to workshop they said its breaks are cut "

Arnav: just relaxed "so i was right " he just kissed his wound, "look at Anjali and khushi"both were laughing at some thing

Khushi: shyly looked at him and then wave her bangles in air

Anjali: bohat pyar ha bangle wala se

Khushi: blush and ran away

Arnav: just look at them with moist eyes .


the wedding took place he made sure both stay in front of his eyes does not go anywhere .he as payal and akash were doing ritual he felts he was coming close to him just standing next to him as if she want to feel him

Arnav: tum thek ho

Khushi: can i come with jiji

Arnav: why not

Khushi: aap help kara

Arnav: sure placed his hand on her shoulder "i will talk to buaji"

Khushi" smiled with tear eyes ..

Ruksati taken place

Arnav: buaji khushi is coming with us as payal will feel home sick khushi will give her company

Buaji: per babuwa

Arnav: please

buaji: take care of my titilya .

Arnav: look at her , he felt her eyes has a fear "i will i will"

buaji: your responsibly take her with you.

Arnav: smiled her look at her with eyes she was asking him what happen. he walk to her " chalo "

Khushi: thank you you are best she move forward but then stop

Arnav: not here khushi winked at her

Khushi: blush and move away" what you thought i was up to?"

Arnav: you were about to kiss me

Khushi: jee nahi khushfami

Arnav: hold her hand in his "pagal ho chalo "

Khushi look at their hands

Arnav: seat book karwa raha hoon next to me in car

Khushi: jealous

Arnav: smiled


they reached home after bride was welcome and few rasam was done nani asked them to go and change then they will have tea and gossips till light night , everyone agree as they were tired .

Nk , khushi and Arnav walk upstairs

Arnav: khushi go and change i will too

NK: i am feeling so uncomfortable in all this he walk to room

Arnav: i am in next room dont be sacred .

Khushi: hold his hand as he was going

Arnav: kya

Khushi: you didnot told me does it suite me today or not

Arnav: look at her "every thing suits you but the bangles goes with it so well"

Khushi: typical men my thing is best she just push him

Arnav: waise you can do that now what you were doing in temple he wrap his arm around his chest

Khushi: i was not doing any thing i was removing your dandruff

Arnav: on remove that

Khushi: knew he want her close to him " aap kyun it came in pictures "

Arnav: kissed her suddenly.. closed her mouth with his fingers "mosquito will go in " he said and walk out

Khushi: look at door

Arnav: knock at door as he peep in " please you make a cup of tea with me "

Khushi: shakes her head " just let me change"

Arnav: look at her she was taking off her earrings ."wait" he walk back i will help you ,he just taken off her maang teeka and the other earring .

Khushi: i am taking this off it will break she taken off the bangles and placed it on dresser

Arnav:i will buy you more

Khushi: no these are special .. i will wear it after changing you go

Arnav: "pagal" he walk out


Khushi walk to wash room as he too walk to freshen up ..

Arnav: came out as someone bang on his door"what the" his hand touch the sower knob and it satrted bleeidn again

NK: Naanav come quickly

Arnav: yar let me wear shirt

NK: wear it later come quickly

Arnav: huwa kya

NK: pull him to khushi room

Arnav could hear everyone there

mama ji" who did this ?"he was placing his hand on her head

Arnav: what happen?

Anjali: chota she show him the dresser

Arnav: how this happen ? he walk to bed side where mami was standing she move away

mami: she just came out running crying badly i was talking to NK

Arnav: Shhh khushi relax relax he just hug her

Nani: betiya i will buy you other one better than that

Mama: who did it ?

Arnav: she taken it off in front of me it was fine just 10 mins back NK was looking it all were broken in to 4 pieces

Akash and Payal ran in

Arnav i will buy you another promise

Khushi: no no she was shivering in his arms

Mama: who every did it, it was a cheap act. as everyone has notice she was playing with her bangles thorough out the wedding and showing very one how perfect it match with her dress .

Arnav: NK bring glue i will fix it i will fix all

Khushi: it will not be like before it will have crack

Mami: came with her bangle box " take all but stop crying" she was moved as khushi ran to her and she hug her and cried badly .

Nani: per yeh huwa kaisa she was patting her head.

Payal: khushi

Khushi was not in mood to listen any one she was just holding his collar and crying" why i taken it off why" she was punching his chest

Arnav: shhh. see akash and NK are fixing it

Khushi: it will have join

Mama ji:Akash fix all then you can go to your room

Arnav: was not getting what to do as he knew it was very dear to her . "come with me i i buy you more "

Anjali look at everyone and she walked out of room ..she walk straight to her room

Shyam was twisting and turning on bed "what is this noise ?"

Anjali nothing she was hunting her locker she taken out the kangan

Shyam: kya huwa hai

Anjali: "i thank to the person who broke her bangles i will give chota these so he placed on her wrist ,it will never break " she said and walk out tears was flowing down her eyes as she remember when she walk out of wash room after changing .shyam was coming in with a cunning smile and he was wiping blood off his hand when she asked he said "kanch chup gaya " she asked him how he said he was placing her bangles in box ,but she notice her bangles were still lying on the dresser ...


mama ji" betiya yeh dekho thek hogai"

NK: thori dair mein sari hojai gai

Mami: jis na bhi kya ha acha nahi kya

Arnav: Ssshh see they are doing it i will buy you more better than this it will fix more perfect on your arms ..

Anjali: "you dont need to chota" she poke at his shoulder

Arnav: Di

Anjali: yeh loo no one will ever try to break this ever she look at the window she saw a shadow

Nani: smiled "Ha chota "

Arnav just look at his family everyone shakes their head ,he hold her hand which was holding his collar and placed both, hold her hand tight in his

Nani:" jis na bhi kya acha kiya kanch to tootna ka leya hota ha "..she hug them both in her arm.

note as other writers i am also going on strike will not updated hope in darkness

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fantastic.šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
Naddiya you are Awesome.
You always give stories from all the different angles. Superb work. Loved it.
Thanks.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: zafi

Fantastic.šŸ‘

Naddiya you are Awesome.
You always give stories from all the different angles. Superb work. Loved it.
Thanks.😊

thx me feeling i should too go on a strike looking like an idiot updating
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fabulous
Exceptional
Unique ā­ļø
Mind blowing
Fantastic
Super Duper
Awesome
Outstanding
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Extremely Entertaining šŸ‘
I just enjoyed it to the core... this really touched my heart for some reason even I don't know šŸ˜‰

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fabulous OS once againšŸ‘
it's amazing how u come up wth such gr8 ideas everyday
Love to read ur work 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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badhiya..
slap on Snake face..šŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks di it was superb and fantastic
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb...loved it...sometimes khushi is like a little child...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nadiya what is ur brain made up of????
so much imagination!!!!!!!!mashallah!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i loved it naddiya dear😊

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