newSS:That'll be the day...Note Pg3

I love the names of all the characters. Very interesting start. But you should totally get it proofread because the punctuation marks and spaces between sentences is not distinguishable. Also try using full forms of the words rather than their abbreviated form. Waiting to read how the story develops.

thanks for the pm. found the concept interesting, waiting to see how things unfold.

thanks again and TGIF

Wow Shabbo 👏
the amount of effort you've put into the character's is clearly visible...i can't wait to see all the many depths their going be displaying as the story unfurls.
Much Love,
Nmyra

intresting concept pls pm me when u update next part

wowww names kinda confusing but concept very interesting waiting to read more

Aww yay you posted it! :D

Originally posted by: -_-harsh42

Whoopsie!!

Got confused with all the names. . . .

But that's due to the tiny size of my brain!!! 😆

The concept is very interesting. . .

Would love to see how the story unfurls. . . . 😳

thankyou!!!!!

Originally posted by: pgm7

I love the names of all the characters. Very interesting start. But you should totally get it proofread because the punctuation marks and spaces between sentences is not distinguishable. Also try using full forms of the words rather than their abbreviated form. Waiting to read how the story develops.

thankyou sooo much!!!!😳

Originally posted by: Nmyra

Wow Shabbo 👏
the amount of effort you've put into the character's is clearly visible...i can't wait to see all the many depths their going be displaying as the story unfurls.
Much Love,
Nmyra

yup!!😉!...thankyou!!!😳