OS: Teri Ishq Mein Meri Jaan, Fanaa Ho Jaaye

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..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

awesome OS...very beautifully written

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FarighInsan

@FarighInsan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Ouch :( U killed Arnav :(

that was so sad...and so good...the way she hears arnavs voice, and that verse ... :(

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Nice OS! i like how you managed to bring the intensity of their love even in a small paragraph!!

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

...😃

4 pming me...😊

4 late comment as always...😕

ur all updates r

..dear...⭐️

u dane just ...👏👏

4 this n keep it up sweety...👍🏼

me just ...😳😃

just wanna ......❤️

& also lots of ..

lov,❤️

Tama

P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only made it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...😡

P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕.

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Elle

@Princess-Elle

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

OMG, this was so sad. My eyes were going moist by the minute I finished reading it. 😭

The pain Khushi was feeling was described to sheer perfection.

Nanna, You are way too amazing. How do you manage to write so well? 👏

Keep writing 😊

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Vanisha

@TheBlueAngel

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

OMG Arnav will only be in Flashbacks???😕

ohhh dats too sad..poor Khushi..😔

nyways w8in 2 knw mre abt wat happened..😃

Edited by fallenstar - 13 years ago

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silki

@joa123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

sad and touching 😭

well written ...but I hate sad ending 😭

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sharme

@sparklystarstud

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

NANNUUU!!!!!!

u made me cry...it was short yet heartachingly AMAZING!!!!!

Tere dil mein meri saanson ko jagah mil jaaye,
Tere ishq mein meri jaan fanaa ho jaaye...

finally realized the meaning of FANAA...

ur words...they are PAINFULLY BEAUTIFUL sweety...

cant even imagine arnav dying...and seeing such a devastated kushi...

i really dont think i've the power to imagine that situation...

LOVED IT alot for pointing out my inability...

with lots of luv

~~~~~~~~~~~sam

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Blue Rose

@uniquebluerose

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

awww this was rally very sad Os...the pain of Khushi almost makes me wish that she had died along with Arnav...

oh gosh!!!

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Khushi

@khushix

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

This OS has been plagiarized.

Link to original story:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6913622/1/Teri_Ishq_Mein_Meri_Jaan_Fanaa_Ho_Jaaye

Getting inspired by others stories is fine provided proper credit is given. But copying word to word and changing the character names is strictly not allowed. Plagiarizing someone else work/story is against the forum rules.

Closed.

Edited by khushix - 13 years ago