What could've been different in today's episode?

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adeeti10

@adeeti10

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Posted: 13 years ago

1. When Khushi asks Arnav to slap her and closes her eyes, he could've gone closer like he did and then some more, nearly caressing her cheek, so she feels his presence before whispering softly "chhodo... rehne do... tum sah nahi paaogi"

2. In the kitchen, when she tries to walk away from him the first time, he could've pulled her back, clamping his hand on her wrist and then said "talk to me dammit..."

Neither of these scenes would offend the senior or junior audiences would they?? 😉

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LuvShuv

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: adeeti10
2. In the kitchen, when she tries to walk away from him the first time, he could've pulled her back, clamping his hand on her wrist and then said "talk to me dammit..."

This would have been a good writerly touch.

It suggests that ASR is especially bothered by KKG's uncharacteristic silence.

It disturbs him.

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adeeti10

@adeeti10

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvShuv

This would have been a good writerly touch.
It suggests that ASR is especially bothered by KKG's uncharacteristic silence.
It disturbs him.

Totally! If it bothers him that she walks away when he's talking, then it should bug the hell out of him that she is not talking at all! And I thought that's why he went to the kitchen in the first place! 😉