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Posted: 13 years ago
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Munchy is quiet disappointed with her favourite show these days. Actually Munchy is wondering why this is the only show she watches? Munchy wonders what it would be like if she were given the chance to play TV god and write for the show. Here is what would have happened to the scenes I found so disappointing:

Actual Scene: Arnav hurls the file away with a swift furious move of his arm and marches towards a twirling Khushi who ends up in his arms and we get a diluted Rabba Ve.

Munchys Take: Arnav hurls the file away with a swift furious and o-so-sensual flick of his arms and marches towards a twirling Khushi, grabs her by the wrists and pulls her close to him. He growls about limits and questions why she is desperate to dance with him? aik dafa kahe howi baat samajh nahi ati? *all whispered growling btw* Naani ji asks Chhotay to behave to which he gives Khushi a once over and leaves. NK comes to comfort Khushi and Arnav clenches his teeth at the sight.

Actual Scene: The whole NK "Tum wahan KYOUN gae they" and after that Di death threat mystery and a samll flash back of 12:00 am and then nothing...

Munchys Take: Aik killer Arnav on the bed going over the day scene tou banta tha! him laying on his bed a arm tucked behind his head thinking about 12:00 am and then her on the bed next to him only to be interrupted with the image of a flower wielding NK nad him holding her by the waist and him saying all that stuff about "aik jawan lrka aur aik jawan larki" and ODB sitting up in bed and running his o-so-sexy hands through his o-so-sexy bed head.

Actual Scene: Khushi slaps Arnav and then shakes in fear and NK interrupts and Arnav screams at Khuhsi to get out and then cancels sangeet and Khushi cries and asks him to slap her to make things even.

Munchys Take: she slapped him and KILLED THE GOD DAMNED MOSQUITO. Smiling in triumph she only notices the fury in his eyes when he has her pinned to the wall and bellowing "What the f**k did you do that for?" in her face and she shakily points at his cheek and says there was a mosquito on your cheek and in her haste to rectify her mistake gently rubs the remains of the poor mosquito off his cheek blowing at it to do a better job and calming him down in the process. EYE LOCK!!! They hear NK calling out Khushi ji and they both fall apart. NK looks at them questioningly as he feels the vibes of something going on. he asks Khushi if she's ok and Arnav grumbles a get out, a command which both Khuhsi and NK follow. Arnav has more FB's of NK holding Khuhsi by the waist and the wrists earlier in the day and cancels sangeet. Khushi thinks he's still mad at her and goes and apologises and Arnav after looking at how remorseful she is says it's ok. then she asks if they could have the sangeet night on and Arnav says no and simply shuts the door in her face!

SIGH... IF ONLY!

O and btw what ever happened to the NEW YEAR promo they were shooting for? how come that never aired... and if it did how some i didnt see it? and i didnt find it on IF either?

EDITED!!! Just wanted to add that i dont want to be the CV i was just wondering what would have happened if things were to go like i suggested... u know... wishful thinking... just adding my two cents... no intention of offending or take some ones job... just saying cos i can...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Precisely how this show is supposed to be. Can you please write for the show and revive it? Kudos to you
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You are absolutely right and your ideas are really good. It just seems like they are just doing meaningless things to fill the episodes and not paying attention to feelings anymore. I mean, helloo?! Arent you supposed to show transition, love, hate, confusion, frustration, feelings anything??
And your ideas show that, which is something the show really needs right now!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it...and as for the promo..cudnt c in forums cos it wasnt aired at all!!!! detour s just annoyin us..and god knows wats gonna happen next...for i think neither us nor the CV's have any idea as to where the track is pointing to...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Looks like our imaginations will have to work overtime to derive any satisfaction from this serial. The CVs seem to have starting trouble with their collective imagination.

What a waste of good looks & talent! What a mockery of our wishes!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome take dear..i sooo like ur version
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Munchy, I am firing LM, n hiring u, Only if I was the producer! 😆

great scenes,,,,had the intensity and passion!! which we desire to see,,,


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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is how it should have been!!!.
Please forward to CVs, they appear to have forgotten how to write this drama
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: subiscs

loved it...and as for the promo..cudnt c in forums cos it wasnt aired at all!!!! detour s just annoyin us..and god knows wats gonna happen next...for i think neither us nor the CV's have any idea as to where the track is pointing to...!!!


IT WASNT BLOODY AIRED!!! W*F!! they made my precious Sarun shoot and waste precious time they could have spent shooting for something sensible and romantic in the show for something that wasnt even aired!!!! BLOODY HELL WHAT!?!?! makes me want to go "sectumsempra" on their asses!! grrr! Munchy is super pissed!
Edited by minimuffin86 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Munchy! You go girl! Now THAT is how it should've been!

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