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Posted: 13 years ago
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wounderful part...loved it ...continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonder whether it was chameli or raman on Arnav's cheek 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Khushi was fixing her bed when she heard a noise "jiji there is some one"

Payal: sleep khushi there is no one

Khushi: just rested her head with the pillow ,she was closing her eyes when she heard hi calling her" Jiji jiju "

Payal; khushi he is sleeping i just talked to him

Khushi just get out of the bed & walked to the window her cell ran "Laad governor " she picked

"hello"

Arnav: open window

Khushi: kya

Arnav: open it

Khushi nahi

Arnav: ok wait he just bell

Khushi: what are you doing?

buaji; kon

Arnav mein

Buaji: just open the door ."what happen is every thing fine"

Arnav:Khushi se baat karni thi

Buaji:wait i will call her she walk to the room she saw her sleeping she walk back " woh tou sogai let me wake her"

Arnav: chora she is a loser

Khushi just jump out of her bed "buaji kon ha " she just walk out

Buaji: Arnav

Khushi: look at him from buaji behind

Buaji: haato move her away and walk to her room

Khushi just shiver"buaji roka na"

Buaji: kya ha he is there why you are scared now?"

Khushi just look at him

Arnav: here is the songs we have to dance on this

Khushi but

Arnav: so you accept your defeat whisper in her ear

Khushi: no i dont

Arnav: you have practice on the other songs and i haven't so that is why i have selected new songs.

Khushi: look at the time it was 11 ,dekha you are giving me cd and i dont have a drive

Arnav: so you accept your defeat

Khushi: no

Arnav: then see you

Khushi: wait let me change

Arnav: what?

Khushi wait here of you leave me then i will thing you have accepted your defeat , she walk to buaji ji room and he heard her talking . she came back with her sweater . "chala"

Arnav: where ?

Khushi: mera suraal

Aranv: what the why i take you to your suraal?

Khushi: uff i meant to say jiji ka suraal , buaji close the door.

Arnav look at her she was rubbing her hands .just drive to RM

Khushi just walk out she straight walk to NK room knocked .

NK: didnot reply

Khushi: ab kya kara ..she walk to the study picked the stereo

Arnav: look at her . she just walk to the pool side"what the"

Khushi: you have change the song and i dont have any other place to listen

Arnav: are you crazy

Khushi: what is so craziness in this?

Arnav: it he paused he look at her she was flying mosquito.

Khushi: you go and sleep please, i will keep the volume low

Arnav: just look at her she was tied her duppata , he came and sit in front of her

Khushi: now i cannot practice

Arnav:scared

Khushi: i am not scared , you will distract me nothing else

Arnav: just open his lappy " you are not madhuri dixit or any"

Khushi: i am Khushi and dont try to compare me with any one else. she started dancing . she was not getting how he select the song:" hum aap se aik baat pocha "she listen few songs

Arnav: what you give up?

Khushi: these are not wedding songs

Arnav: you cannot dance that is why you are making excuse

Khushi: acha wait listen this is this a wedding song it is as if you are proposing someone

Koi To Sathi Chahiye

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vcjTJw6qz1c[/YOUTUBE]

Arnav: look at her

Khushi: why dont you slap me and finish this anger of yours , i know because of that you have change the songs she just walk to him" in that way you will sleep peace fully and me too"

Arnav: look at her she just kneel down

Khushi: hit her eyes was closed

Arnav:look at her she was just waiting for him

music change

Banno Ki Saheli

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NUTX9yUxZu0&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]


Khushi just look at him
Arnav: is not this nice song
Khushi look at him as she was lost in the music
JAAN MERI JAA RAHI HAI SANAM
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HmjPyhN1Cq4&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]


arnav: khushi you think i dont have any sense of music ,may be i am not romantic but still i have that static sense . you dance on the songs which you have selected and i declare you winner he close the laptop
Khushi: aap naraz ha as he pull the chair away and walk to his room
Arnav: looked at her "go and sleep in guest room"
Khushi: just walk to him kissed his cheek suddenly "i also give up you won today " ran out of the room left him stand like a statue again , but this time he had as smile on his lips and his hand was on the spot where she had kissed him .it was the same place where she slapped him in the morning .
we both step back from the challenge and made each other winners as here we both are winner.


Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Brilliant os!
the last line brought a smile to my face😊...
dun noe why such things dun happen in the show... 😔
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaniax

Brilliant os!

the last line brought a smile to my face😊...
dun noe why such things dun happen in the show... 😔

because i am not writer or Cv 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Superb conclusion to the OS👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey i just read part 2 now
ur OS was so cute but it was abit conffusing reading it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
nce , lst line ws d main highlight ... amazng !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shokofa

hey i just read part 2 now

ur OS was so cute but it was abit conffusing reading it...

what is confusing ? did i made mistake
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
oh
so cuteee
amazing ya
1ce again u won my heart
fab
i mean d idea of repenting her slap by a cute kiss was d best of all n i can imagine his cute smile
loved it byeee

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