OS: Chalo Bhai Australia! Part 4: Realization - Page 3

Originally posted by: molten_lava

Hey Annie,

Thank you so much for liking it and for such big comment.😃

The way they were taking their love story ahead in the serial, I realized they have to take lots of baby steps to get closer. And love is not just romancing each other. It's about understanding and supporting each other, most importantly being beside the person you love when they need it the most.

And I think this is what happens with most couples in real life. (I have no experience, I'm just assuming). I can partly identify myself with what Arhi feel. So I thought if serial is not taking them ahead, why shouldn't I?😆

btw, English literature and creative writing was always my weakest point. Never has any teacher ever appreciated my writing, not even my parents.

So your appreciation means a lot to me.⭐️

Originally posted by: AnnieKittWatt

Oh (sorry don't know your name! Or should I call you just 'molten_lava"? eh?), that's my pleasure! I kind of love writing Long comments, so you may find me doing that at times!😆
Yup, I know! The serial took a huge step for that Diwali night, and then, again came back to square one - Hatred! They've been giving signs to every character in this story, but none of them seem to comprehend it... at least, not the right the way! They're kind of slow for now as they are concentrating on the other couple, so I guess we'll be getting only glimpses of their new feelings surfacing.
I am very much with you! You've shown them a path to follow to which neither Khushi nor Arnav will ever disagree! And I seriously like that! These 'baby steps' are very much essential, like you said!
Hahahaha😆...that happens! Especially when you're writing something, those thoughts eventually sow some new thoughts to be explored and you end with so many revelations! That is the power of Imagination! I love to read, and I, myself, write, so I understand your POV...
Aha! Love, from my POV, cannot be described just like that.. It is everything possible in this world! Everything positive and negative (well, some stuff like pain, sorrow, death... but they eventually are overcome with happiness. As they say Good always wins over Evil!)
Just like the whole universe consists of plus-es and minus-es, Love also has plus-es and minus-es, lest they would never exist! Because positive charge always has a negative charge out there! Example, Light and Dark... (one of the best examples to explain)
There are so many writers who have not gone through those feelings, yet they write about it! Sometimes, they are right and sometimes they maybe wrong. It is said that those who write about such issues, are ones who have experienced it themselves or experienced by someone and have been told about.
I, myself, haven't experienced such stuff (*touchwood to evade negative energy😆😳), but I do write about them. In fact many writers, here in this forum, do that! Those who have experienced them, and write about them from their POV always, looks like as if they've been drilled to think about it only in one such way! Mind you, am saying those who 'Always' write it in one particular way (sometimes become pessimistic about what they write)!
But we guys are free to use our imagination and can write it in innumerable ways! Right? 😃😉
But we should make it a point to not offend anyone or anything, but at least try to touch that sensitive part of our readers - their Hearts... and make them happy! 🤗
Oooh! Have I gone in Detail? OMG?! teehee...😆😳
Hey, hey, hey!! Don't say that! Don't ever underestimate yourself! Now that you've come out in the open and have started writing, let me tell you... Even I am new here, in regards to writing stories. And I've two stories up my sleeve to update. I know that it's strenuous, but it's Fun for me! I have started liking it!! For now, as am busy with my exams, I've put them on hold and informed my friends/readers about it, so they've obliged. Even I was kind of scared😕 to put up any posts, even though I had it all ready! But then, I thought 'Let's just give it a try, at least!' And, then, it was really smooth! I was appreciated and also kind of criticised, but that is a way of learning, pal!
Those are Our Baby Steps to success! You know what I mean?
Even I've had my share of bad experiences... But that hasn't let me down...Ever! (well, sometimes they have, but I've learnt how to tackle such stuff!😳)
I know that you write it all from your heart. (We all write it from our Hearts and present it on plates of this Global platform for our readers and friends) Right?
It doesn't matter if anyone likes it or not (well, actually some encouragement is very much needed, or you kind of feel dejected)... You write what YOU want to Write...😃 Write what you feel, ignoring and cutting out all kinds of discouragement.
Reading your SS, I don't think you're at all bad in literature! In fact you're pretty good,... Amazing, I should say! And 'weakest point'? I don't think so! You're going good, as a matter of fact and do stick to that!! It'll be a pleasure to see your other works...😃
Don't worry, pal! I wish you the Best for your exams and pray to god to give you strength and wisdom to do well and pass out with flying colours!!
Hope I did not Bore you!😳

Annie😳

Originally posted by: molten_lava

Hey u can call me Rachel. Wow, ur words are so inspiring. Thanks a lot. And good luck with your exams too. 👍🏼

You didn't bore me. It's always nice to read comments like yours. Oooh! even u write OS!! then I such definitely read yours too.😊

Sometimes, I think it is so strange but wonderful, that two people like us, complete strangers are conversing and appreciating each other. I have to applaud IF for this.👏