OS: Chalo Bhai Australia! Part 4: Realization

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molten_lava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Nici0306
loved each and every bit... thanks for sparing time before your exams.. but awesome update.. and your updates are worth waiting.. so will wait till 11th jan.. it would be actually a b'day gift for me.. as it's my b'day on 12th jan.. :)

Thanks for loving it. Hopefully, my update will be a memorable b'day gift for you.😃

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PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Hey molten_lava,⭐️
I just read all the parts in one go, and let me tell you that it has been an amazing and beautiful journey till now!
Seriously! You've captured their emotions so well, and described them equally well, even with simple words.
That subtlety in their relationship is very well portrayed in your OSs/SS, that I still can't stop gushing about it! 😃
You've understood the level of their understanding between each other, and have taken it to the next level in the same way, letting them explore each other's world slowly and steadily...
This trip has been very much refreshing to ME as well, as it is for the two of them. Because there is hope in what you're doing.
You have moulded it carefully, and encapsulated their very emotions at particular moments making it impatient for us to know more about his and her future...Their future...😳
I can't help but keep on applauding you for such a Beautiful piece of work!👏
Please do continue!😳

Regards
Annie😃

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meenaluma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

awesome update pls continue soon

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Sanchari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

I was really stupid I didn't read it . And while reading all the parts, I wished it never ended.

Just fantastic, and I want pms for sure, sent you a req.

Another thing, do me a favour and say what he was wearing during the horse ride😎

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jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Lovely Story :) 😳

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molten_lava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: AnnieKittWatt
Hey molten_lava,⭐️
I just read all the parts in one go, and let me tell you that it has been an amazing and beautiful journey till now!
Seriously! You've captured their emotions so well, and described them equally well, even with simple words.
That subtlety in their relationship is very well portrayed in your OSs/SS, that I still can't stop gushing about it! 😃
You've understood the level of their understanding between each other, and have taken it to the next level in the same way, letting them explore each other's world slowly and steadily...
This trip has been very much refreshing to ME as well, as it is for the two of them. Because there is hope in what you're doing.
You have moulded it carefully, and encapsulated their very emotions at particular moments making it impatient for us to know more about his and her future...Their future...😳
I can't help but keep on applauding you for such a Beautiful piece of work!👏
Please do continue!😳

Regards
Annie😃

Hey Annie,

Thank you so much for liking it and for such big comment.😃

The way they were taking their love story ahead in the serial, I realized they have to take lots of baby steps to get closer. And love is not just romancing each other. It's about understanding and supporting each other, most importantly being beside the person you love when they need it the most.

And I think this is what happens with most couples in real life. (I have no experience, I'm just assuming). I can partly identify myself with what Arhi feel. So I thought if serial is not taking them ahead, why shouldn't I?😆

btw, English literature and creative writing was always my weakest point. Never has any teacher ever appreciated my writing, not even my parents.

So your appreciation means a lot to me.⭐️

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zafi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Aww, That was fantastic.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved, Arnav giving up his fav room, his Hoodie To KHushi. Seeking her Approval about his shirt. Khushi getting rid of Arnav's fear of riding horses. Fabulous.

Looking forward to the next update. Thanks.😃

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molten_lava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: -Murphy369-
I was really stupid I didn't read it . And while reading all the parts, I wished it never ended.
Just fantastic, and I want pms for sure, sent you a req.

Another thing, do me a favour and say what he was wearing during the horse ride😎

Let me leave that to your imagination.😆

I can imagine him in so many outfits but I think I will make him wear Blue jeans and white full sleeved shirt with those sexy aviators he wore on the bandagement day. 😳

If we add cowboy boots and hat, he will definitely look like a cowboy- OMG!! Hottie Cowboy Arnav😳😆 Control, Control *I'm panting*🤣

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UltimateBarun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: molten_lava

Thank you so much. Your appreciation means a lot to me😃
BTW, I'm a big fan of your posts. They never fail to make me laugh😆

yaar, I am very bad at reading!! I dotn read at al, becoz i lack patience, but here all u great writers, full of talent!!! I couldnt resist reading OS, n its about Arnav n khuhsi, se I juust read OS, no FF"s etc!

fan!! one n the same, I admire u for ur wrting skillls, N u for me funny posts, but some time they suck!!😆, its not possible to bring that funny elemtn always!🤢

I read ur prev parts while on bed using my phone, so couldnt comment, as using touch screen for typing is again I hate that!😳

thanks for the dose of OS!

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molten_lava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: UltimateBarun

yaar, I am very bad at reading!! I dotn read at al, becoz i lack patience, but here all u great writers, full of talent!!! I couldnt resist reading OS, n its about Arnav n khuhsi, se I juust read OS, no FF"s etc!

fan!! one n the same, I admire u for ur wrting skillls, N u for me funny posts, but some time they suck!!😆, its not possible to bring that funny elemtn always!🤢

I read ur prev parts while on bed using my phone, so couldnt comment, as using touch screen for typing is again I hate that!😳

thanks for the dose of OS!

Thank you so much for typing such a big comment despite using touch screen. I know it is a big pain in the butt.

I'm sorry if you don't find my comments on your posts but I make sure that I like them. It doesn't mean that It sucks. It's just that at times, I'm out of words to comment. my vocab goes haywire after writing down stories like this😆

I'm just happy that I could entertain you😃

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