Kuchh Khaas Hai Update Part 4 Page 4 imp note pg 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is my first time writing so please bear with me.
CHARACTERS
Arnav - male lead
Khushi - female lead
Sanjana - Arnav's cousin
Anjali - Arnav's sis
Payal - Khushi's sis
Akash - Arnav's cousin bro
Mama & Mami
Nani
Shyam - Anjali's husband
Arnav's thoughts - blue
Sanjana's thoughts - purple
Khushi's thoughts - red
{English translation} - pink
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Arnav was sitting by the poolside when his phone rang. It was his cousin from America, Sanjanashe had called to inform Arnav that she was returning to India. Arnav had informed his sister Anjali about Sanjana's arrival and was ecstatic when she heard the news.
Use aane do tab main dekh lungi. Bina bataye woh aisi aa rahi hai.
{Let her come, I'll show her. She rocks up without telling anyone.}
There was a knock on the door and it wasn't very unexpected after all evrybody knew she was coming.
Sanjana was very excited to see every one but the one she was waiting to see hadn't shown his face. Mujhe pata tha ki aisa kuchh hone wali hai aakhir maine bin bataya ghar wapas aayi woh tho naraz hogi.
{I knew something like this was gonna happen. After all I did show up without informing anybody. Of course he's going to be angry}
Sanjana knew Arnav as a wealthy, arrogant business tycoon that had no time for love and would probably never love but little did she know that something else was instore for here. She sat chatting to everyone having a good time until she saw an unfamiliar face.It was a girl she hadn't recognized.
"Di, yeh kaun hai?" {Di, who is she?}
She was looking at Khushi, Khushi Kumari Gupta a fun loving, innocent, young naive girl that always wants evreyone to be happy.
"Yeh Khushiji Hai. Akash ki saali." {This is Khushi. Akash's sis-in-law}
They were introduced to each other and got along well. Within a few hours they were practically sisters.
Sanjana had had enough for one day after all she had just gotten back but she couldn't have gone to bed without meeting her beloved brother. She knew he was angry with her but she also knew she could pacify him.
Main bhaiya ko jaa kar milti hoon aur use manaa leti hoon phir sab kuchh theek hoga.
{Let me go and meet Bhaiya and pacify him then everything will be all right}
As she walked into Arnav's room she didn't see him so realized he must be by the pool. She turned to look outside and there saw something she had never seen before. Someone was with him but she couldn't see. she took a few steps closer and stopped as she couldn't believe what she saw.
KHUSHI! Bhaiya ki baahon mein.
{Khushi!! In Bhaiya's arms.}______________________________________________________________________________
Pls like an comment. Let me know what you think and if u like it I'll write a part II.
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Riya.Raj thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please comment and like really want to know waht you guys think.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barbie_244

Bhariya!!!👏👏👏



Thanks 4 da lovely comment. If enough people comment and like I'll write the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey very interesting start but very short!!!

Eager to know how this story will develop, hope you will post the next longer part!!

Please PM me when you do.

Happy New Year!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sounds interesting...cant wait to read more...please pm me!!!
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Originally posted by: Juicee_Sushie

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2" color="#ff0033">Hey veryinterestingstart but very short!!!</font>

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<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2" color="#ff0033">Eager to know how this story will develop, hope you will post the next longer part!!</font>
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<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2" color="#ff0033">Please PM me when you do.</font>
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<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2" color="#ff0033">Happy New Year!</font>



Thanks. Will make the update longer.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks everyone for the nice comments. I will try to update as soon as possible. Will pm yoiu when it's done.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sounds very interesting.
Please update soon. Thanks.😃
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Here's part 2. I got nice comments so decided to carry on. Hpe u like it.
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Meri aankhein mujhe dhoka nahin de sakti hai. Iss ka matlab yeh ki bhaiya aur Khushi didi ki beech mein kuch toh hai, lekin kya hai yeh toh mujhe pata lagana hoga
{My eyes can't deceive me. This definitely means there's something going on between the two of them but what it is, I have to find out.}

Whenever Khushi fell Arnav caught her. Today wasn't any different. After a long day helping with wedding preparations Khushi just needed some air to breathe. A nice quiet place where she could just take in the fresh air. In RM there was only one place like that. The pool outside Arnav's bedroom. She knew he wouldn't like the fact that she was there but she really didn't care what he thought.

Bohot jald jiji ki shaadi hone wali hai phir hum akele hoga lekin hum yahan roz aaogi jiji se milne. Koi kuch bhi kahe, who humari jiji hai aur waise bhi is ghar agar koi humein rokne wali hai toh who hai Laad Governer. Humein koi farq nahin parda. Lekin baar baar hum use kyun yaad karti hai akhir iss ghar mein toh aur bhi log hai. Pata nahin kyun humein kya hota hai. {Jiji's wedding is going to happen very soon then I'll be alone but I'll come meet her everyday. I don't care what anybody says. She is my sister and there is only one person that would stop me, Laad Governor. I don't care but why do I think of him everytime, there are other people in this house. I don't what's wrong with me.}

Khushi wasn't aware of anything, she was so lost in her thoughts when she slipped and was about to fall face first on the ground when she felt a firm grip on her arms stopping the fall. She hugged him because she was still a little scared, she didn't want to open her eyes and didn't even know who caught her but she had a feeling it was him. Suddenly she heard a voice.

"Khushi' Khushi, tum theek ho na. Lagi toh nahin?" {Are you okay? I hope you're not hurt?}

"Haan hum theek hai." {no, I'm fine.}

"Tu yahan kya kar rahi hai?" {What are you doing here?}

"Hum' woh'" {I... Um...}

Khushi couldn't say anything she didn't understand why couldn't she answer a simple question. He let go of her and she ran back to the living room to avoid any more questions from Arnav. All this while they were talking and staring into each others eyes Sanjana was trying to figure out what was going on.

Main teen saal ke liye America jaati hoon aur yahan sab badalti hai, khaas kar Arnav bhaiya. Use kya hua hai. Who koi paas na aane deti hai na khud kissi ki paas jaati hai toh yeh kya tha jo maine dekha tha. Iss ghar mein koi iski bari mein pata toh nahin hoga. Mujhe khud pata lagana hoga. Jahan tak mujhe pata hai bhaiya ka girlfriend Lavanya thi but they broke up aur woh usse pyaar toh nahin kiya tha. Khushi didi ke saath baat kuchh aur hai' Kuchh khaas hai. Ab sone ka waqt hai. Mujhe jo karna hai kal karega. {I go to America for three years and everything changes, especially Arnav Bhaiya. What happened to him? He doesn't let anybody get close to him nor does he get close to anybody, then what did i see. No one here will no anything about this. I'll have to find out myself. As far as i know Bhaiya was dating Lavanya but they broke up and he didn't love her anyway. It's different with Khushi didi. There's something special. I should sleep now. Whatever I want to do I'll do it tomorrow.}

"Good morning bhaiya," Sanjana was up early and first went to see her brother because she didn't get a chance last night. She was determined to find out what was going on between the two but knew Arnav's temper and couldn't ask him directly.

"Tu kal raat nahin aayi thi. Maine socha thi ki tu aaogi kyun maine tumse baat naihin kiya." Arnav was sitting by the pool on his laptop getting ready for a video conference but always had time for his sister even if it meant he had to cancel it. He was angry at her but he still loved her. { You didn't come last night. I thought you would come because i wasn't talking to you.}

"Aayi thi lekin aap busy tha. Main bina knock kar ke andar aayi thi aur aap yahan bahar thi isi liye main chali gayi thi." {I came but you were busy. I came in without knocking and you were here, outside so I left.}

Kya usne mujhe Khushi ke saath dekha tha jab who gir gayi thi. It's none of her business if she saw anyway. Mera life hai kissi ko jawab dene ki zarurat nahin hai mujhe. {Did she see me with Khushi when she fell? It's none of her business anyways. It's my life, I don't need toanswer to anyone.}

"Bhaiya main aapko achi tarah se jaanti hoon aur main yeh bhi jaanti hoon ki aap kya soch rahi hai. Agar main aapko ek baat poocho toh kya aap bina jhoot bol ke jawab dungi?" {Bhaiya I know you very well and I also know what you must be thinking. If I ask you something will you answer me truthfully.}

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Edited by rpremduth - 13 years ago
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wow nice post pm me plmz wen will u update.

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