Look agree with all your points except the 2nd one because I watch this show with mom. Also, too much of romance at the 8:pm slot is not done. Well I don't mind more of Arshi scenes.Originally posted by: Neemsundari
I've been reading a lot of posts on IF about various aspects of the how the audience is dissatisfied with.
This is what I said on Mr. Mohan's FB page:Love your show. It is refreshingly different and subtle, and you have an awesome lead pair.
If you have suggestions of your own, please create a topic on the page, or comment/like my comment on there if you agree with my suggestions.
A few cribs though:
1. Inconsistency in Khushi's character---showing her jumping in place and all the really childish comic antics just after the trauma she went through with Shyam jarred the audiences. Also her Desi girl dance, gatecrashing the party seemed totally out of character, and also wrong---it was Arnav's party and she had no right, and Desi is not always better than other cultures. Surely, there could have been more creative ways to highlight her sensuality? Arnav's character is so consistent, even in its evolution, is it unnecessary for Khushi to grow?
2. Too much comedy, too little romance: Nowadays the show is mostly fillers. Please take into account that your core audience does not want to see buaji, mami, etc---you have lead pair of talented actors with excellent chemistry, we'd like to see more of them and their journey of love-and-hate.
3. Anjali, Payal, Garima: Why can we not give these characters slightly stronger roles? Except for Payal who occasionally speaks up, none of the other young ladies have any spine. All Anjali does is cry, smile and pray, and all Garima does is toe the line. If we are to have these characters, could we have them play meaningful roles please?
4. Shyam as villain: Shyam as villain is very unrealistic---it is impossible that his truth hasn't emerged in front of anyone. The actor playing Shyam is doing a great job, but is it possible to give him a strong back-up story and make his scheming slightly more credible?
You've set the bar very high with the episodes pre-diwali, please keep giving us the standards we're now used to.
Thank you so much, and hope you'd consider some of the suggestions.
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