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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

nice..read the ff with both the pairs..good work..😊

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Alisha

@luv angel

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Loved it! And the feelings being portrayed! Thanks for the pm

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

I so admire the way you write and vocabulary. It was beautiful. Is there going to be a second part? I wish there is, it was so interesting to read.

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nahtani88

@nahtani88

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

amazing os
thanks 4 the pm

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Tich

@Jin.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

oh i just love this OS.
its fabulous.
arnav literally took my breath away
and khushi has been so sweet.
as the title says, i touched my soul.

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Soulmate27

@Soulmate27

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Superb, Excellent, Wonderful :D

Beautifully written...wow vocab n language...

A pleasure indeed to read ur work...hope u write more :D

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Lena

@.Lina.

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

New ArHi OS:

Dancing Tango

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Addie07

@Addie07

Inactive

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

hey lena..

this was so amazing...

the way u have described the character of Arnav , it was fab and even khushi, her attraction to the lonely boy.. her innocence... her silent yet defensive nature wen it comes to Arnav..

simply fab...

. do continue soon n plzzz pm me...

its totally totally fab

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

beautiful.
amazing characterization.
brilliant writing.
thanks for sharing your talent with us!

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punjabiquddi

@punjabiquddi

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

This was an amazing OS!! I kept hoping it wouldn't end. The concept is very interesting and I would love to read it as an FF!! Looking forward to reading your other works!

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