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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
It was sweet n painful. Pls write one more frm khushi's pov.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Beautifully written 😊

Something like this should happen in the show 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Nice yaar .👏
i loved the 2nd part ❤️.
Pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
too gud ! cntue yr.. wan asr to mend & melt in kushi thugts !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww that was so touching 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Payal: looked at her say she walked in"khushi kahan thi"

Khushi: just didnot reply she just hold his jacket tight in her fist and walk to her bed she just lay down

Payal: khushi tum thek ho she just checked her fore head

Khushi: just closed her eyes Arnav's eyes appear in her eyes.

Payal "change tou kar lo"

Khushi: didnot reply

Payal: covered her , and walk out of room to close the lights

Khushi: "kon se roop aap ka sach ha, humari insult karna yeh she just run her tongue on her lips could feel him .


Arnav: just rested his head with the back of the seat ,smiled at himself . he started car but it didnot crank "what the" he just search for his cell"oh it was in coat pocket . now what?" at that time payal off the light.

Arnav: someone is awake let me take my cell . he just walk out and knocked the door, didnot bell.

buaji was talking to payal she heard ,"iss waqat kon "she asked

Arnav: mein hoon khula

Payal: Arnav ji they open

buaji: kya huwa beta

Arnav: woh

Payal: agar aap apni jacket lana aai ha woh to Khushi ka paas ha

Buaji: go and wake her

Payal was about to go

Arnav : nahi dont wake her .. "in heart so you want to feel him sleeping like that"

Buaji: kya huwa

Arnav: look at time it was 1:30 , my car is not working and i cannot go home, if i call home i will wake everyone.

Buaji: you sleep in guest room ,she look at his face he his eyes was drowsy .

Arnav: woh

buaji: lock car and come she asked payal to come with her .

arnav: just peep in the room he saw she was sleeping hugging his coat . he just locked the car and walked back. he again stare at her .

buaji: aao babuwa. ,sanka devi tou pata nahi kis baat per naraz ha .

Payal: buaji hide sugar ,raat ko utha kar jalebi bana laga gi

Buaji: na paayaliya bana dana iss ko shayad iss tarah iss ka daard kam ho , hum ko to iss ki is haasi se daar lagan laga ha .

Arnav: look at her

buaji: beta tum sojao araam se .yeh loo kapra .

Arnav: look at a kurta pajama ..

buaji: it is new .

Arnav: just took it from her, and walked to the room

Payal: aap ko kuch chaiya tou nahi

Buaji: beta kitchen yeh ha la lana.

Arnav: smiled and he walked in the room . he just changed and lay down ,he was very sleepy he slept with in few mins..


Khushi woke up at 3 as Arnav cell vibrate, she just jump out of bed and check the pocket" Laad Governor sona bhi nahi data" she look at his cell, then in shocked kept her hand on her mouth"un ki life tou iss cell mein ha aur yeh humara paas ha , hum bhi nahi daga ab. "she look at Payal, then look at her . she walked to change the sari .walk out with in few mins ..look at his coat and cell."aaj hum aap ka coat ko jalebi khaliya ga " she just wear it and walked out with a naughty smile. she started making jalebi" next time you will not give any girl your coat" she just quickly fry it with a naughty smile she walked to the guest room" i will sit here and eat" she just walk in and lock the door and on the table lamp. she taken out the cell and started dialing his bed room number . "pick up Lard Governor" the ring was going,

Khushi: hum aap kai coat mein apna haat saaf kar raha ha

Arnav: karlo i will give it to dry clean let me sleep

Khushi: hum aap ka phone ko jalebi ka sheera(syrup) mein dip kar raha ha shayad iss ka baad aap jab baat kara to kuch meeti ho

Arnav: khushi karo jo karna ha just let me sleep.

Khushi: suddenly hears "the person you are not dialing is not responding try later" she look at the phone "

khushi: just eaten few more jalebi "hum pagal hogai ha ,hum ko un kai awaza kahan se aarahi ha "she just rub her ears.

Arnav just look at her she was sitting on the chair with her back towards him. he just smirk and walk out of the bed.

Khushi: "hum na such mein awaz suni thi " DM DM DM

Arnav: whisper in her ear "khushi kumari gupta "

Khushi: just jump out of chair " bhoot " she could not shout as he placed his lips to seal her .

Arnav: just pull her to him and run his finger in her hairs . he just let her go as he though he has became over sweet.

Khushi: look at him from head to toe.

Arnav:i am real not a bhoot

Khushi: aap yahan kya kar raha ha

Arnav:just walk to bed and lay down "sleeping"

Khushi: this is my home ,and these are my babu ji clothes .

Arnav: acha he just closed his eyes

Khushi: i can take from you any min, and say get out

Arnav: let me sleep now do your nautaki in morning.

Khushi just walk to him " i am saying get out"

Arnav: pull her arm she just fall down on him"if you want to sleep here come " smiled at her kissed her

Khushi: chora

Arnav: " you are lying on me"smiled

Khushi: just manage to move away he just peek her "aap"

Arnav: looked at her dont over react you loved when i kissed you , to feel me you are still wearing my coat .

Khushi: why you are here ?

Arnav: same reason as i cannot stay away from you,can i sleep now ?enjoy your jalebi just close light before going out .

Khushi: look at him his eyes was closed he was just smiling . she just closed light and walked out ."he is more sweet than my jalebi "kept the plate and walk to bed with her arms warp around her to feel him.

Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
AWESOME OS👏
Beautifully written...I Really loved all the part's
Thnx for the PM😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
Wow the third part is sooo dreamy😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Lovely part !!! Very nice !!! Thnx for the pm !!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Awww... Loved it... Its soo sweet...! 😍

Thanks for the pm...!

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