Os: nephew entry with Khushi in arms

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Manorama masii he yelled
Woh agaya manorama yelled

Everyone saw him Nyerere but shock spread through every face.
What the ph... ASR whispered

Shyam looked on with his perverted eyes, with shock.

Khushi Ji anjali ran towards manormas nephew who was carrying
Khushi in his arms.

Khushi bitiya yeh dab kaise hua nani ji asked shocked

Woh actually...

Nahi kuch nahi woh main Ghir gayi

Hello hi bye bye Dekho to kaise mere handsome Betay SE chipki hai hello hi bye bye

Arrey mausi yeh jhoot bhol rahi hai der rasal yeh Sarak pe walk ker rahi to aur achanak Maine ghalti SE inhe apni ghaari SE maar diya

What ghalti SE kisiko ghari SE maarna ghalti SE aghar Khushi ko kuch ho... Asr suddenly stopped as he saw everyone staring at him confused

Woh actually...

Khushi interrupted him again and said

Woh app fikr mat keriye ham theek hain she said to the guy but she new from her heart that these were meant to calm arnav as he still looked on scared

App
Mujhe neeche uthar di jiya

The guy heeded but quickly extended his hand out as Khushi almost fell

Arnav stared with hate on his eyes for the guy and concern for Khushi he shouldn't have kicked her out of the car. She got Hurt cz of him once again. He just stared not blinking breathing or moving as the guy carried Khushi to the couch and touched her feet to see if her ankle was twisted

Stop Arnav said as he saw him moving his hand towards khushis feet

Chotay app khud to Khushi Ji ki help nahi ker rahey aur inhe help Kerne SE rok rahey hain

Srry di Arnav took a last glance of Khushi and went to his room

Kuch to garber hai the guy thought he smiled and fixed khushis ankle that had been twisted

I kno you guys might hate it Annmd so desperatly want to throw stuff at me for wasting ur time all I can say is m sorrryyt guys this is my first os on this forum I tried to do my best but I guess I ruined it this idea came to me and all I wanted to do was write it. Sorryyy guys plz dont b mad

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Posted: 13 years ago
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no its really good start ! if your going to continue could you please PM me the next part . that would be great ! 😊 and please continue ! ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lol...nice start for your first OS. I liked it and I liked the concept in particular - good thinking. 👏



If you get a chance, please do read my second OS. It's called ''Coochie coochie coo'' and is a comedy. The link is below:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2430073/my-2nd-os-coochie-coochie-coo

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one!! plzz continue!! and plz plz plz send me pm when you update the next part!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was superb
u should continue and PM me next time you update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice os continue it. wen will u continue pm me plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was really nice,u should continue n plz pm me

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