OS: Main Hoon Na - Page 6

ROFL !

Originally posted by: -Garima-

LOLL!

I absolutely loveee that dialogue from Main Hoon Naa! :D HAHA! Amazing OS Nayika! I loved how Khushi addressed him as "uncle" lololl had a huge grin at the end of it! :)

You always bring a huge smile to my face with your writing, keep it up! (:

--Garima

I love it too! I say it all the time and as soon as Khushi referred to him as Uncle in that episode this OS just popped into my head :D

Glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: smileyhug7679

kushi uncle mat khao yaaar
poor fellow will get is BP high

Haha, yeah he's having some non-uncle type thoughts making his BP already high and then she makes it worse by calling him uncle :P

Originally posted by: egle

So damn cute! 😃

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

oh my godd!! 🤣🤣🤣

that uncle totally put me into fitss of laughter!!

Originally posted by: arhi-sarun-fan

Its really very nice Uncle???!!!!😆

Originally posted by: maanviluvzvirat

FIRST OF ALL THANK U FOR THE PM

AND THEN I LOVED IT I REALLY LOVED IT I LIKE HOW U USED ''UNCLE''. iT WAZ SO CUTE👏

Originally posted by: desisweetheart9

Thanks for the PM. Loved it. Loved the muh toh bandh karo uncle.

Thank you all so much! So glad you found it funny :)

Originally posted by: ..Jojo..

This was just amazing! LOL! I can so see Khushi doing that to him one day! Nayika, you write the most amazing OS's! Loved this one, now I am off to read everything else :D

Thanks so much! Hope you like the other ones too!

Originally posted by: Arhi-Sarun

this was amazing...that uncle part gave me a good laugh...you always write amazing stuff...love your work...thanks for the pm hun

So glad you liked it and thanks for liking all my other work :)

Originally posted by: nyxx

Uncle 🤣

Oh how I would love to see things like this after Shyam is revealed in the show. Loved both of the convos between sibilings..and ofcourse, ArHi. 😍

Fab as always Shuheda :)

- Dee

I hope we do have cute scenes like this once Shyam's dealt with! Glad you liked it. We definitely need more Akash-Arnav scenes straight away!

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

LOL UNCLE? ahahahahah nicee keep going

Originally posted by: dumas

. 'Munh toh bandh karo, Uncle!'

poor arnav she will be the death of him

Originally posted by: zafi

Loved it. Loved the dialogues.👏 Oh Arnav is such a goner after seeing Khushi.😳Thanks for the PM.😉

Originally posted by: pinkpearlz

Uncle! LOL.
Nice one.

Thank you everyone! :)

Originally posted by: khahani

How I love logging in here to find something written by you! I only log into this forum to see if anything good has been written.

You write really well, it's so easy to follow and get into the story. I have started watching this show about a month ago and then slowly stared to revive my journey to I-F all over again after eons :P

I have read some of your other one-shots and short stories (yet to catch up on everything)...but the current favourites are '30-Days' and 'Wait'please stay'

I really enjoyed reading 'Stay'...that is exactly the kind of ending I would want in a real life situation, if the girl in question was mistreated like Kushi.

Looks like the Laad Governor doesn't appreciate Kushi reffering to him as an 'uncle'...I don't blame him especially with his wayward thoughts regarding Miss Pompom LOL

Keep up the good work :)

Nahee

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it :)

Hope you do like all the other works as well!

Yes, he's definitely having some non-uncle type thoughts after seeing her so he doesn't appreciate it :P

Great!!! awesome writing... Keep updating and make it fast... :-)

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

Thanks for the PM Nayika! Naughty... naughty Khushi! Wish I could see this scene on the show!

No reason why NOT?😉

I definitely think we could see something like this! Totally in character for Khushi once she gets over her nervousness around Arnav :P

Originally posted by: sari.love

I love how u try to creat little romance with funny behave of khushi..i wish if this happen in serial...dying to see their romance...😉

Aww thank you :)

Originally posted by: MairaKhan1180

Thank you for the kind message and for the links 😊 I remember watching Main Hoon Na so many times, it was one if the great movies. Very well written, just love it!

So glad you liked this! I love Main Hoon Na too.

Originally posted by: dbr_kmichi

lol!! very nice

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

LOL this was cute 🤣

Originally posted by: sushi-la

uncle!! oh my! what a sexy uncle..hehe 😉😳

loved it! thanks for the PM!

Originally posted by: malluangel

haha leave it up to khushi :P UNCLE?!?!?

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

simply fab

Thank you everyone!

Originally posted by: reyabear

🤣"Uncle?" the last part had me lol-ing. Loved it! Gosh, now I feel like watching Main Hoon Na. :P

Haha, glad you liked it!!

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

it was awesome...

i dont know how it realtes to Main Hoon Na but I can relate it the "uncle" that the kids called him when he was standing while Khushi was fixing the tyre of his car !! LOL

Originally posted by: savi-tan

Didn't know that there was such a dialogue in Main hoon na...good one!

Lucky says it to Ram when he's staring at Miss Chandni and then Ram says it to Lucky when he's staring at Sanju.

Originally posted by: minimuffin86

UNCLE!!! 🤣

HAHAHA! he really hates it when she calls him that! but i loved this. and Akash is such a woman about this whole thing yaar! ahahaha

Haha, yeah I figured this is what Akash would be like after seeing his little preening session in the car :P

Originally posted by: littlemoi

hahahahahah🤣 "uncle?" lol awesome os!! thank you so much for the pm!

Originally posted by: immayurfan

Loved it

Awesome os

Originally posted by: lollipop4u

This was absolutely awesome!! Please continue!

Originally posted by: arshi93

LOVE IT!!!

Thanks everyone!

Arnav must be screaming from inside, 'UNCLE? UNCLE' 😆🤣

Originally posted by: uniquebluerose

You know the moment...Khushi said 'Munh toh bandh karo, Uncle!' and walked away...sorry strutted away...I half expected the song to start with "dun tana dun tana"...well I am bad at humming and will just post the link of that song shall I?????

It was faboulous update esp since Lavanya has broken up and Shyam is also not here...

your writing and descriptionwas superb!!! esp the lines

"enticing strip of skin calling out to him to touch it then back up to her big brown eyes calling out to him to drown in them"

Oh OMG not only Khushi eyes..but Nayika or Shuheda your writing invites us to drown in them...I just read them as soon as i get your PM and any interruption is frowned upon...you know!!!!!

he he he

Haha thanks so much! Glad you liked it :DDD

Always love reading your comments!

Originally posted by: bhavnah

loved it...especially the dialogue

Originally posted by: MsCeylon

🤣

You caught me by surprise whe you mentioned Uncle...

Originally posted by: -Gautami

🤣d Uncle dialogue realy put me into laughter..Luvd d OS!!

Originally posted by: akshi_2

LOL! Greatt post :D

Originally posted by: ArshiLover

Hahaha...best part - "muh to bandh karo uncle!" hahaha😆

Nice one!!

Khushi (😆ArshiLover😆)

Originally posted by: anita_21492

so cute!!!

the uncle part just cracked me up...bechara arnav

thhanks for the pm

Originally posted by: mohitkizee

Lol..thats really funny
I love that dialogue frm MHN..thnx for PM

Thank you everyone! :D

Originally posted by: arooshee

uncle???

pluzzz!!!!

khushi aisa mat kaho

that UNCLE can do many wonderful passionate things to u😉

Haha so true! :P

Originally posted by: Lekshmic7

Superb!! Uncle... LOL; loved it

Originally posted by: tina_1234

last few lines were d cutest...love dis playful khushi

Originally posted by: A...

Very nice Nayika👍🏼...luved the wicked Khushi😉

Originally posted by: dyhardfan

Great Os THANKS:)

Originally posted by: preethi12345

uncle !! lol ,,

Originally posted by: SiRul

🤣 Unclee

Love kushi and love this OS

Originally posted by: savvz

he he he... :)

uncle... :)

Thank you so much everyone! :D