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@shabo24

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Woah. Look at all those likes. I don't even watch this show Gari, and I lovvved it! You write really well, I honestly thought that was one of the best things you've written so far. Plus, I like the font. 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

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That was beautiful, Garima :) Seriously, I loved your writing to cores <3 Every emotion was rightly worded and rightly placed. Amazing writing, girl!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: --Nargis--
It was beautiful...with a very REAL feel!! 👏

Aww, thanks Nargis! (:

Originally posted by: lara3110
Loved your OS. It was so sad and I admire Khushi, her determination and what she did by leaving. Very sad. Bow it is Arnav's turn to decide what he wants and what he has been hesitating to admit.

Aww, thank you so much! (: Yes, I want to see a determined Khushi in the show too, and of course I want Arnav and Khushi together, but I want Arnav to actually feel all the pain Khushi felt. Thanks for commenting!

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani
Wonderful OS!! Nicely written!!
It made me feel bad but it felt good to see Kushi as strong one here!

👏

Thank you so much! (: glad you liked it!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: anfield206
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ATLEAST U SHOWED KKG HAS SOME SELF RESPECT...WHICH WE R NOT SEEING IN THIS SERIAL NOW A DAYS

Haha, yess in this OS she does have self respect! Thanks for commenting!

Originally posted by: Lyraa99
it was so very beautiful..sad but really touching

Aww, thank you so much! (: Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: ShiningStar18
It was beautiful yet a little depressing at the end. Nevertheless, loved it. I really wish to see the same kind of passion between them onscreen.😳 *fingers crossed*

Aww, I know. I was actually in a depressing mood yesterday so I had to write something sad. But I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much! (:

Originally posted by: arshi1
no.ooo...

Awww :( I'm sorry for making it so sad!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: NaDzGirl
never say good bye kabhi alvida na kehna. hum hain rahi pyaar ke, phir milenge chalte chalte

lovely os sweetheart 🤗 now write a happy happy one

Thank you so much! (: I will for sure!

Originally posted by: rbarretto
its so beautiful...

Thank you! (:

Originally posted by: sarach
its really good.though sad but well written

Thank you so much! (:

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: anjaani07
Hi Garima, this wasn't 'crappy' at all, it was beautiful and so sad, enjoyed it, made me feel heavy hearted but at the same time I loved reading it!!

Do write more and please PM me when u do :)

Asma

Hi Asma! (: Awww thank you soo much! That is so sweet of you! (: Thanks for commenting! I'll definitely PM you the next time I write something! (:

Originally posted by: Zeee
wooo! love angst from arnav's side. beautiful
xxx

Thank you so much! (:

Originally posted by: nayika
You seem to like all the same songs I do!! :D I thought this song would be perfect for them too if Arnav ends up getting engaged but hopefully he won't! Awww YAY! lol, I thought no one would know this song, but I'm so glad we have soo many similarities! :D Yess this song is so right for them as of now.

Such a great story, and so sad! Aww, thank you! (:

So much angst all over the forum, I think we're still in a bad mood despite yesterday's episode which in my mind was just basically the equivalent of Johnny-Lever-Comic-Relief scenes in films. Haha, I know exactly what you mean. But I was kind of in a gloomy mood last night so I had to write something depressing. Don't worry though, my next one is a lot happier. LOL I love Johnny Lever and his comedy sceness! :D Thanks for commenting Nayika! (:

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: tina_1234
awww nyc one but sad one :(

Thank you!!

Originally posted by: shabo24
Woah. Look at all those likes. I don't even watch this show Gari, and I lovvved it! You write really well, I honestly thought that was one of the best things you've written so far. Plus, I like the font. 😆

LOL! I was so not expecting all those likes dude. 😳 😆 Awww your sooo cute! :D Thank you so so soo much Shabz! It means a lot to me! 😳 And I'm so happy you read it even when you don't watch this show. But I think you should watch a couple episodes! 😉 They're quite intriguing. LOL I like the font too! 😆 Thank you so much Shabo. Miss you so much!

Originally posted by: MissButterfly
That was beautiful, Garima :) Seriously, I loved your writing to cores <3 Every emotion was rightly worded and rightly placed. Amazing writing, girl!

Thank you soo much! (: You are so sweet, thanks for the lovely comment! (:

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Beautiful OS, but Grrr I was going to use this song for my next update for Tearing Ourselves Apart, I had planned it for so loonggg and you got there first !!

Slightly dissappointed, but hey, I have to hand it to you, you did a great job and you did the song justice. This is better than what I would have come up with for my next chapter anyway, so I guess I'm a bit (only a very little bit) happy that you got there before me.

At least you like the same music that I do, that song is amazing, I guess Ill have to find some other sad song that fits my next chapter !

Anyway, moving on from my selfish talk, this OS is absolutely beautiful, you gave Khushi dignity and respect, whilst also showing how much she really wants him and how much she is giving up.

Beautiful OS xx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: tinsel
Simply Beautiful👏

Thank you so much! (:

Originally posted by: angelic shaz
it was beautifullly written
awesum!!

Thank you so much! (:

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: areeba_blossom
Beautiful! Brilliant and touching!

Thank you soo much! (:

Originally posted by: ccuteaangel
Beautiful OS, but Grrr I was going to use this song for my next update for Tearing Ourselves Apart, I had planned it for so loonggg and you got there first !!
Slightly dissappointed, but hey, I have to hand it to you, you did a great job and you did the song justice. This is better than what I would have come up with for my next chapter anyway, so I guess I'm a bit (only a very little bit) happy that you got there before me.
At least you like the same music that I do, that song is amazing, I guess Ill have to find some other sad song that fits my next chapter !
Anyway, moving on from my selfish talk, this OS is absolutely beautiful, you gave Khushi dignity and respect, whilst also showing how much she really wants him and how much she is giving up.

Beautiful OS xx

Omg, I'm so extremely sorry! :( I had no idea you were going to use this song for your update. In fact I thought there would be no one who knew this song on the forum. But hey, you can go ahead and use it for you update, please don't change it because of me! And does that mean your next update is going to be sad?! :( Oh nooo! Haha, Awww I'm glad we have the same taste in music. This song is so utterly beautiful, I literally dive in to the lyrics whenever I listen to this song! :)

Thank you so soo much! (: It means a lot to me. Yeah, I wanted to show Khushi be a bit more determined, but in the show I'm always hoping that Arnav and Khushi come together. Thank you so much for commenting! (:

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