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@SK1991

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

wowww wonderful asma...great job...👏👏👏

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Hey,

That was beautiful. The echoes must have been heart-wrenching for ASR but well, I'd say the guy deserves it for treating Khushi the way he does as well as for not accepting what he actually feels.

I love the way you've narrated every single detail and I can actually imagine ASR going through all of this.

"He closed his eyes and tried to gather the pieces of him that made him ASR; he wanted to be strong, uncaring...unfeeling... but he couldn't find those pieces anywhere. They were drowning in the agony too and eventually he gave in and let it wash over him. 'Aap teek toh hai naa...' "

I'd love to read more by you...😊

Love,
Dee.

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Riya Dutta

@RiyaDutta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Thanks a lot for the PM dear!!🤗

Another smashing and stupendously fantastic OS!!👏⭐️

Loved it as always...it was so heart-wrenching!!!😭👍🏼⭐️

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Asma

@anjaani07

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: -Garima-
Aww Asma this was phenomenal! (:

As I've told you before, after reading any of your work I feel like it happened for real, and it leaves a different feeling in me. Awesome job with this one. Arnav's emotions were perfectly emoted. I hope something like this happens in the show. =)

--Garima

Wow thank u Garima, that means a lot!😳 I always worry if its coming across right and i wrote this one in a bit of a rush without any editing so im happy to hear that🤗

I dont know if anything like it will happen in the show after reading SBB and promo updates but we can still hope in the future!

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@anjaani07

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Mellowfellow
Asma? 😊

Lovely once again, thanks for the PM.

Want to add, love the way you dont sugarcoat the scenes and let it end with the reader floating in the memory of the previous words!

I dont know what to say except thanks😳

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tinsel

@tinsel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Beautiful and Emotional update,Thank you dear 😭👏

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shybabe

@shybabe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Another great piece of work...😛

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@anjaani07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Nikita99
Asma its awesome. Its not only ASR's feeling, i was also feeling the same. Oh and yes tears are in my eyes but i really needed that. Hate see him suffer but love it how u showed Khushi's confusion. And i think its her turn to be confused. Thanks again for writing.

Aww Renuka🤗 In a way im sorry it made u cry but then if u needed it then i guess its ok? Actually i only started writing this scene after i spoke to u so people have u to thank for it really! I'm glad it turned out ok and people understood it so well...i was feeling the same as u!

Yeah I think Khushi is confused cos she'd accepted that he doesnt love her so doesnt understand why he's reacting like that...let's see what heppens but i doubt it'll be very predictable!