OS: 'Echoes'

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Asma

@anjaani07

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

OS material been removed upon writers request. Story has been moved, PM writer regarding more details.

Edited by minuu - 12 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wonderful piece of writing x

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Neemsundari

@Neemsundari

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

Lovely writing.

I know everyone in the forum is feeling bad for ASR, but I wish he would suffer like you've made him suffer in this OS. Suffering creates the cracks in the heart through which the whispers of love may be heard.

Unless he breaks down, taking the walls around him down in the process, he would never be able to accept his love. He recognizes it now, (well who wouldn't recognize a punch in the gut?😕) but he will only accept it if he is broken, and to break, he has to suffer. I wish at least the last part of the OS would appear in the show.

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shakethebiscuit

@shakethebiscuit

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

:((((

for khushi we feel bad.. but when ASR gets sad.. it makes the whole forum SAD :(((

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Another smashing OS sugar!!

Reading this at 2am...so you're not alone!!!

You've written this brilliantly hun. Even though Arnav had little dialogue, his pain spoke volumes.

Loved it!!

Thanks for the PM!

⭐️

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Asma

@anjaani07

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower
Another smashing OS sugar!!
Reading this at 2am...so you're not alone!!!

You've written this brilliantly hun. Even though Arnav had little dialogue, his pain spoke volumes.

Loved it!!

Thanks for the PM!

⭐️

Oh ur here in the UK too🤗 Guess we're all a little sleepless tonight!

Thanks for saying that: it came from the heart and i didnt get much time to edit it so that means a lot x

Edited by anjaani07 - 13 years ago

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Marci

@Marci

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

That was emotional!! So sad!!😭

Lovely piece of writing dear:)

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow, that was beautifully! Arnav's feelings and the agony that hes going through was perfectly depicted by youre narration! Loved it! Do pm me...would love to read more from you :) Ill send you a buddy request as well :)