OS: Khushi's Realisation

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Addie07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

this is very touching and emo... fab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Wah Wah Wah 👏 Absolutely breath taking !

Couldn't beleive that this is your 1st time 😲

Please keep writing.

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.Euphoria.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hey Guys🤗

Thank you SO much for all this support and positive comments! I'm really glad you like it. For those who are wanting PM's please BUDDY me.

I know it's really depressing and sad I have no idea why it turned out that way!

Much love to you beautiful people
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: ccuteaangel
Hello 😊

First of all, you should be thanking your writing talents rather than me 😳 but thank you lots for the mention, I'm sure you would have managed it perfectly without the extra umph!

I am really happy you got this up, it is so good, I have no idea what you were nervous about. You are a great writer.

I felt it was really realistic, and it made me sad for Khushi as I read it, you wrote it really well.

She realised that his pride and ego will always get in the way of him ever being able to admit to himself or her his true feelings. She realised that the man who stood in front of her will never be hers.

urgh, SO HEARTBREAKING, 💔

I would love to read what Arnav is thinking the whole time and what the thoughts are behind his expressions.

Do keep me updated with whatever you write and Great job 👏

and thank you for the message 😊

Hey dude! Thank you so much for liking it! I was kind of inspired by the discussion on the forum about confessions and why ASR announced his engagement so I thought it would be kinda cool if Khushi realises herself yet doesn't say anything to him. And obviously I've written from Arnav's viewpoint too so you can kinda see why he wanted to announce his engagement date. 😊

Edited by angel_eyez123 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan
WOW that was so poignant! In that moment of finding out about Khushi's engagement... ALL his bravado is gone and he CANT hide the naked pain in his eyes!

There is NO getting away from that expression on his face now! Even if he CANT verbalize it yet... he can NEVER pretend now that Khushi Kumari Gupta is NOT the love of his life! He LOVES her and SHE should know it now too!

The game is up Arnav... your secret is not a secret anymore! SOON everyone will find out about it!

Thank you for liking it!
Yup you got it right, I really wanted to show an Arnav who is slowly unraveling...the more he runs away from his feelings the more he can't hide his emotions. I really want him to kind of slip up and do something where Khushi herself kind of realises that he loves her.